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What is our function?

A poem

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Comment from scongrove
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Another wonderful post, my friend :) The artwork is eye-catching, too.
The last paragraph is my favorite. A great message!
Don't point beyond the valley's depths, but look to God above,
He sent His Son Lord Jesus Christ to give His life in love.
For nothing else can please the Lord, but faith in sacrifice,
His blood that's shed can cleanse all souls, our faith pays every price.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
    Thanks again, you are a great support Shana,
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
    Thanks again, you are a great support Shana,
Comment from BethShelby
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Our role in life seems to be to keep the faith and love other and above all to love God and seek to follow wherever he leads. I'm glad that he realized the we are all sinners and there is no way we can reach perfection in our present state.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
    Thanks Beth, for these sage comments and a supportive review, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
    Thanks Beth, for these sage comments and a supportive review, blessings Roy
Comment from forestport12
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Love that verse. Hebrews 11:6 your poem is with unforced rhymes and flows. But best of all it flows with truth as green as a valley and rocky as a mountain side. On point

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Thanks so much for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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another masterful exploration of your Christian faith. This one is a bit too preachy for my taste but is well done from a poetic craft point of view so I gave it a high rating.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Thanks so much Jake, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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What a beautiful poem of faith. I love the imagery of the mountains. That they don't hide. We sin and try to reason our way out of it. It's hard to hold yourself accountable, but God's love is so strong and his forgiveness is all encompassing. Lovely poem, Roy. Gretchen

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Thanks so much Gretchen, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
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We are light, His voice, hands and feet. Much to do until He returns, which seems to be coming. Thank you for stirring us to act, my brother.

Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Thanks Sally, for these wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Lilly Flowers
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i broke my arm and can only do reviews from time to time

as always, this is very poignant

i think our role in this dark world is to shine a light whenever we can

blessings, lilly

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Thanks so much Lilly, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
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A fine poem, and well written. I don't think it's our faith that pays every price, Jesus did. We only sacrifice our worldly views and plans. That's what you were saying?
"It's" should not have an apostrophe here, as that is short for "it is". Thank you for sharing.
Wendy

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Thanks Wendy for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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This is a lovely poem to go to bed on, Roy. Faith is all we have, and that's all we need. The older I'm getting the more I think about my faith in God. Is it enough? Your words give me hope, and the strength to trust myself. Thank you, my friend, this was just what I needed. Love and hugs. Sandra xx

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Thanks so much Sandra, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from DeboraDyess
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Hi Roy ~
It IS tough to balance the fact that sin separates, that we all sin and that conviction is a necessary part of salvation and the love that God has for man, even in a fallen state. People are such delicate creatures these days! Talking about sin seems to be offensive to many folk. How do we lead them to salvation if they don't acknowledge that sin exists?
Well done on the poem! I hpray that someone reading it will feel God tug at their heart.
Blessings,
Deb

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Thanks so much Deb, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy