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Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

I always liked your horror Haiku or poetry genre. Dean would be proud of this one.

This one tells a macabre story - good overall presentation!

Mark

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Mark,

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....this poem could be describing a voter's journey to the polls to vote for a Republican, any republican or a tribute to Dean!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    LoL Thank you very much, Mike. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I miss Dean and his poems too. I used to tease him about being able to read his work before I went to bed. LOL Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Yes, ravens are referenced a lot in literature.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    Barbara,

    Dean was a kind person and had a lot of friends.

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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You and Dean were a great team together! And it's October so how can we not remember our King of horror poems? Thanks for sharing and I liked the reference to the raven.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    Thank you very much, Helen. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Love you ❤️

    Gypsy
    "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". -- Novalis
reply by lyenochka on 05-Oct-2022
    You're so welcome! Have a restful night! Hugs and Goodnight! 💖💖🎵
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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This is just like what happened in Ft. Myers where people woke up one day, lost everything and found their houses in the middle of ocean. It was like a nightmare except it was true.

Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    Yes, that sounds like a nightmare, poor people. Thank you very much, Lisa. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". -- Novalis
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your Sijo poem- excellent picture presentation- reminds of my yard after the recent hurricane!!- Poem is rich will familiar metaphors re-enforcing the theme- ravens-nightmares- travel to the underworld- Hades- paints a clear picture of the journey to loveless hell- very cool- also excellent is the time taken to expand and inform in your notes- good job

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    Thank you very much, ap. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". -- Novalis
Comment from prettybluebirds
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I remember Dean Kuch, he was here when I first found this site. Your poetry always reminded me of someone, and now I know who it was. This poem is excellent as all your writing is. Good work.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
    Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your time and kind review.

    Gypsy
    "Hope rises like a phoenix from the ashes of shattered dreams." --S.A. Sachs