Cowboy talk to God
C0wboy and horse praying.52 total reviews
Comment from Frank Malley
Mr. Smith has written something of a classic cowboy poem. In tetrameter, he uses perfect rhyming couplets to reflect upon what his life has been and where he hopes to go next, "...where where old cowboys roam/And ride the range of ma heavenly home." The poem's a little bit corny, and probably romanticizes improbably about a hard life style, but it's very well done. 'Stirs up 'memberin' my stirrups on the shelf.' Like the end scene of a 1950s western.
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Mr. Smith has written something of a classic cowboy poem. In tetrameter, he uses perfect rhyming couplets to reflect upon what his life has been and where he hopes to go next, "...where where old cowboys roam/And ride the range of ma heavenly home." The poem's a little bit corny, and probably romanticizes improbably about a hard life style, but it's very well done. 'Stirs up 'memberin' my stirrups on the shelf.' Like the end scene of a 1950s western.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-You wrote a very good poem with effective
imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job portraying the cowboy
and his decision to offer a prayer to God.
-I like this line: "But my body says whoa and ma' age is showin'"
-He is very honest and sincere in his requests; he loves his horse
and would like to "ride the range of ma' heavenly home."
-Good concluding lines, too.
-Well done!
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-You wrote a very good poem with effective
imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job portraying the cowboy
and his decision to offer a prayer to God.
-I like this line: "But my body says whoa and ma' age is showin'"
-He is very honest and sincere in his requests; he loves his horse
and would like to "ride the range of ma' heavenly home."
-Good concluding lines, too.
-Well done!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
Comment from Dawn Munro
Your lingo throughout this poem is absolutely the best -- I loved it, and I loved the topic too. I'm not a cowgirl, but I sure felt the 'twang' and I certainly envisioned all that you wrote -- nicely done!
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Your lingo throughout this poem is absolutely the best -- I loved it, and I loved the topic too. I'm not a cowgirl, but I sure felt the 'twang' and I certainly envisioned all that you wrote -- nicely done!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
Comment from lavendermoon14
This is a great poem. We all wish that we had just a little bit more time to do everything before we pass. No life is lived without a few regrets. Excellent job!
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This is a great poem. We all wish that we had just a little bit more time to do everything before we pass. No life is lived without a few regrets. Excellent job!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Interesting taletelling of this poem, the cowboy wished and talked with Lord, the cowboy wishes to go to roam in the heavenly home of the cowboys; he wishes to ride horse and go for the adventure; well said, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR 06/01/2023
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Interesting taletelling of this poem, the cowboy wished and talked with Lord, the cowboy wishes to go to roam in the heavenly home of the cowboys; he wishes to ride horse and go for the adventure; well said, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR 06/01/2023
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
Comment from karenina
This font seems perfect for a handwritten note written out on the range somewhere. It's straight from the heart and very touching. I'd like to think with all the big wig high fallutin' talkers out there, God would appreciate a simple note like this!
Karenina
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This font seems perfect for a handwritten note written out on the range somewhere. It's straight from the heart and very touching. I'd like to think with all the big wig high fallutin' talkers out there, God would appreciate a simple note like this!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile with this cowboy write Willie, I loved the chosen font as it seems like you have noted this with your own hand and thank you for sharing your talk with God with us. You have so much more to see yet, you and your horse, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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You made me smile with this cowboy write Willie, I loved the chosen font as it seems like you have noted this with your own hand and thank you for sharing your talk with God with us. You have so much more to see yet, you and your horse, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful poem/prayer, honest and meaningful and from the heart. Authentic way of speaking. I'm sure that when the time comes, your heavenly home will be just perfect.
Wendy
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Beautiful poem/prayer, honest and meaningful and from the heart. Authentic way of speaking. I'm sure that when the time comes, your heavenly home will be just perfect.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from harmony13
I enjoyed the read of your poem/prayer. I found it engaging, descriptive
and creative. I pondered on the words of this poem and thought about
how the author words related so well to a cowboys dreams! The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and I liked how the
horse's head is bowed. Great Poem!
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I enjoyed the read of your poem/prayer. I found it engaging, descriptive
and creative. I pondered on the words of this poem and thought about
how the author words related so well to a cowboys dreams! The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and I liked how the
horse's head is bowed. Great Poem!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from Raul1
I think that some persons are silly in a way of how they badly treat certain nice people in real life. In some sense of it it just doesn't make sense. I have enjoyed reading your poem. Excellent work!
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I think that some persons are silly in a way of how they badly treat certain nice people in real life. In some sense of it it just doesn't make sense. I have enjoyed reading your poem. Excellent work!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
