Quiet Lawyer
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25 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
You do a great job of exploring people's insecurities about status and position, and how that affects Cord and Alexandra's behaviour. I love that they're able to talk it out and enhance their understanding of one another. Then the escape room scene is a gentle example of how they're turning into a team. I thought this was a beautifully written chapter.
Mike
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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You do a great job of exploring people's insecurities about status and position, and how that affects Cord and Alexandra's behaviour. I love that they're able to talk it out and enhance their understanding of one another. Then the escape room scene is a gentle example of how they're turning into a team. I thought this was a beautifully written chapter.
Mike
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nice dialogue. I love escape rooms and you nailed that pretty good. This is definitely interesting work and something that I would read. I'm no grammatical genius, but I couldn't find any errors.
Very nice job Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Nice dialogue. I love escape rooms and you nailed that pretty good. This is definitely interesting work and something that I would read. I'm no grammatical genius, but I couldn't find any errors.
Very nice job Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I do hope to see you again.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
I'm afraid I haven't been following your story, but I may have to go back and catch up. You did a great job with the dialogue. I don't have that talent. This is an interesting story, but frankly, the part I liked the very best was the quote at the start-'nothing mends a broken heart like someone wonderful giving you theirs." Brilliant!
Have a blessed day gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Hello Barbara,
I'm afraid I haven't been following your story, but I may have to go back and catch up. You did a great job with the dialogue. I don't have that talent. This is an interesting story, but frankly, the part I liked the very best was the quote at the start-'nothing mends a broken heart like someone wonderful giving you theirs." Brilliant!
Have a blessed day gal.
Tom
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. That quote plays through this entire novel. I hope you drop by again.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The escape room was kind of a mystery. I have to reread the part about why they went there in the first place. Alexandra's parents are wealthy people. So glad that Cord and Ali talk things out...
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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The escape room was kind of a mystery. I have to reread the part about why they went there in the first place. Alexandra's parents are wealthy people. So glad that Cord and Ali talk things out...
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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why did they go to the escape room? Just part of the city's tour? Or were they trying to solve a case?
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Just to see it. It was something to do other than the opera or ballet. Cord needed something more active.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I look forward to reading your work, and you didn't disappoint me with this chapter. You did a great job keeping things moving between the discussion in the car and the safe room. I am eagerly waiting for the next installment. Have a great evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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I look forward to reading your work, and you didn't disappoint me with this chapter. You did a great job keeping things moving between the discussion in the car and the safe room. I am eagerly waiting for the next installment. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from estory
I liked this post. I think you did a terrific job with the dialogue between Cord and Alex and we really see all that tension that can develope as people define their relationship. We see Cord struggling with feeling like Alex is too good for him, that she comes from a more priviliged world, and Alex trying to make him feel at ease and that she is comfortable with who he is. And then the two of them working together in the escape room is the perfect metaphor for the need to work together in life. estory
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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I liked this post. I think you did a terrific job with the dialogue between Cord and Alex and we really see all that tension that can develope as people define their relationship. We see Cord struggling with feeling like Alex is too good for him, that she comes from a more priviliged world, and Alex trying to make him feel at ease and that she is comfortable with who he is. And then the two of them working together in the escape room is the perfect metaphor for the need to work together in life. estory
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You have moved your story along nicely. I knew Cord's ego would get in the way sometimes. I d9o not see any room for improvement.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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This is another excellent chapter. You have moved your story along nicely. I knew Cord's ego would get in the way sometimes. I d9o not see any room for improvement.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Did you mean to give me 4 stars?
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No how do I change it.
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No, my finger slipped. Can I fix it?
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Yes, just go back in and put in the rating and save.
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OK tkx
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Thank you.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is another excellent chapter, Barbara. I enjoy how the story reads easily, and you take your time with Cord and Ali's life events. It always makes it seem natural. Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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This is another excellent chapter, Barbara. I enjoy how the story reads easily, and you take your time with Cord and Ali's life events. It always makes it seem natural. Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I enjoyed this as they face another snag in their romance but are able to come to an agreement. I have never been in an escape room, not sure I really want to do something like that, but glad they were able to solve the problem.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed this as they face another snag in their romance but are able to come to an agreement. I have never been in an escape room, not sure I really want to do something like that, but glad they were able to solve the problem.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
There are so many little things that can come between young couples as they learn about each other, most of the time, things that won't make any difference later on. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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There are so many little things that can come between young couples as they learn about each other, most of the time, things that won't make any difference later on. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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So true. Thank you for this kind review.
