One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Sugarray77
Your lovely Somonka is very well written. I enjoyed reading the eloquent tankas that blend into one verse. So well done, Gypsy. :).
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Your lovely Somonka is very well written. I enjoyed reading the eloquent tankas that blend into one verse. So well done, Gypsy. :).
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy.....I wish you had saved this for winter when the cold wind howls and blows straight down my pants--err--outside my window; you know, to warm me up!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy.....I wish you had saved this for winter when the cold wind howls and blows straight down my pants--err--outside my window; you know, to warm me up!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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LoL
Thank you very much for your time, kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very innocent, yet sensual poem. I enjoyed viewing both the male and female viewpoint. I could visual the scene. You also gave us hints of not only the image the scents.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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This is a very innocent, yet sensual poem. I enjoyed viewing both the male and female viewpoint. I could visual the scene. You also gave us hints of not only the image the scents.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written Gypsy, the language is good, the narrative very stylish and traditional reason for this style is intact, and a very.good example in that, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Beautifully written Gypsy, the language is good, the narrative very stylish and traditional reason for this style is intact, and a very.good example in that, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
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Most welcome
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Somunka love poem- good picture presentation of a young girl- poem has a good flow and paints a picture - in motion - as it relates the feelings of the subject- nice job
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I like your Somunka love poem- good picture presentation of a young girl- poem has a good flow and paints a picture - in motion - as it relates the feelings of the subject- nice job
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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AP, thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a beautiful Somonka poem. I like the difference between female and male's responses and concerns. I love the last line:
for last sunset in your eyes.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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This is a beautiful Somonka poem. I like the difference between female and male's responses and concerns. I love the last line:
for last sunset in your eyes.
Excellent.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Lisa, I appreciate your exceptional review and six stars. I'm happy you like it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
You certainly wrote a sultry and passionate poem here. You made good use of the invocation of senses of smell (lavender) and touch (peach fuzz) and sight with the sunset.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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You certainly wrote a sultry and passionate poem here. You made good use of the invocation of senses of smell (lavender) and touch (peach fuzz) and sight with the sunset.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, big sister. The club event is about romantic love, I tried to keep it tasteful. I hope you are having an awesome weekend, resting and doing word puzzles with your husband. LoL
Love you,
MariVal
Comment from Bill Schott
This somonka, Summer Breeze Kisses, has the proper formatting and finds the mutual admiration between this couple will likely lead to addition senryo in the morning.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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This somonka, Summer Breeze Kisses, has the proper formatting and finds the mutual admiration between this couple will likely lead to addition senryo in the morning.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, Bill, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment from lancellot
Very nice, smooth and sensual. Yes, It is easy to picture that scene if you've been there before. There is nothing quite like that tiny peach fuzz on the skin reflecting in the sun or moonlight. Breathtaking.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Very nice, smooth and sensual. Yes, It is easy to picture that scene if you've been there before. There is nothing quite like that tiny peach fuzz on the skin reflecting in the sun or moonlight. Breathtaking.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, Lord Lancelot (*=*) hehe... love your pen name.
I appreciate your exceptional review and six stars. You are very kind. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus