Untested Quietness
Not saying anything is unbalanced14 total reviews
Comment from Judy Lawless
Yes, sometimes we have to wonder whether all these ideas for being a better person are of real value, Deniz. You've given us a perfect example and wrapped it up nicely in this poem.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Yes, sometimes we have to wonder whether all these ideas for being a better person are of real value, Deniz. You've given us a perfect example and wrapped it up nicely in this poem.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Judy.
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You're welcome, Deniz
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This is quite a dissertation holding as many truths as a closet full of skeletons. ................................................................................................................
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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This is quite a dissertation holding as many truths as a closet full of skeletons. ................................................................................................................
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I like your comment. Very fitting. Thank you!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this satire verse.
It explores and pokes fun at those who think they are superior in some way to the average person.
This theme is relatable to all I would imagine, as everyone can think of someone they have known just like this.
The rhymes flow smoothly without force and create a timbre that glides down the page.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed this satire verse.
It explores and pokes fun at those who think they are superior in some way to the average person.
This theme is relatable to all I would imagine, as everyone can think of someone they have known just like this.
The rhymes flow smoothly without force and create a timbre that glides down the page.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting so thoughtfully. Dennis
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Interesting author notes to go with your amusing poem using some well known quotes. I always think, that, like me, other quiet people are just introverts maybe I shall have to rethink.ð???
Enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Interesting author notes to go with your amusing poem using some well known quotes. I always think, that, like me, other quiet people are just introverts maybe I shall have to rethink.ð???
Enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Surely you have some pearls to share which though swine will not find to their taste, others will find helpful? Thanks for reviewing! Dennis
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is hard to judge someone who never speaks and we assume wrongly until we know them and know their opinion, A poignant write Den, you had me thinking here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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It is hard to judge someone who never speaks and we assume wrongly until we know them and know their opinion, A poignant write Den, you had me thinking here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Hi Dolly, I tried thinking once and it gave me a headache. So I got married and now after some sixty years, I don't have to think any more. :) Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it, Dennis
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You made me smile Den, have a lovely day x x x
Comment from mermaids
That old saying "beware of the quiet ones" has some truth to it. Your poem makes the reader think and silence is not always golden. Excellent two line verses with smooth rhyme.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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That old saying "beware of the quiet ones" has some truth to it. Your poem makes the reader think and silence is not always golden. Excellent two line verses with smooth rhyme.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you! Here's to the wisdom I have not yet achieved which guides in knowing when to speak up and when to shut up. :) God bless, Dennis
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Your Author Notes say more than your poem. lol
The poem works, though. Good job.
In my experience, it is impossible to determine whether a quiet person is dumb, timid, wise, intelligent, or just plain tired. Even if the subject is his expertise, he/she may remain silent. maybe to allow others their voice, knowing that should he, an expert in the field, stifle all other contributions. There is just no knowing.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Your Author Notes say more than your poem. lol
The poem works, though. Good job.
In my experience, it is impossible to determine whether a quiet person is dumb, timid, wise, intelligent, or just plain tired. Even if the subject is his expertise, he/she may remain silent. maybe to allow others their voice, knowing that should he, an expert in the field, stifle all other contributions. There is just no knowing.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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All true, just suggesting balance and it's very hard to achieve as you suggest by your thoughtful comments. Thanks, brother, Dennis
Comment from Susan Newell
Denniz,
Your short poem does a great job at countering the oft quoted adages about staying silent. Sometimes the wise don't speak, because they know they won't be understood, and sometimes they can be misinterpreted by someone of lesser intellect. "To speak or not to speak" is an interesting conundrum to ponder. But always, we should do our best to identify and challenge evil, which is not easy these days.
I wonder if an em dash would be better punctuation at the end of your fourth line since it isn't actually a question.
Sue
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Denniz,
Your short poem does a great job at countering the oft quoted adages about staying silent. Sometimes the wise don't speak, because they know they won't be understood, and sometimes they can be misinterpreted by someone of lesser intellect. "To speak or not to speak" is an interesting conundrum to ponder. But always, we should do our best to identify and challenge evil, which is not easy these days.
I wonder if an em dash would be better punctuation at the end of your fourth line since it isn't actually a question.
Sue
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks Sue, now shut up with the suggestions, okay? LOL :)
Sorry, I just HAD to say that! Still working on being balanced in this to speak or not to speak thing...Dennis
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LOL -- Okay, okay. I surrender.
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Thanks for being a good sport...I'm not allowed to talk to my wife that way, just wanted to try it out. :)
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I have tough skin. My husband and I joke with each other like that all the time. If I thought you weren't kidding, I just wouldn't have responded.
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You're making me feel normal! Thanks!
Comment from royowen
I've found, much to my dismay, that I'm still a fool in so many ways, and my adjustment and willingness to change is still a bit sluggish. I can remember meeting someone in North Wales, who seemed to me the epitome of wisdom, saying how proud and foolish he was, I was in awe, the man was greatly revered in many parts of the world, he was old and had known Evan Roberts, the driver of the Welsh Revival. Lord help me, beautifully written Brother. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I've found, much to my dismay, that I'm still a fool in so many ways, and my adjustment and willingness to change is still a bit sluggish. I can remember meeting someone in North Wales, who seemed to me the epitome of wisdom, saying how proud and foolish he was, I was in awe, the man was greatly revered in many parts of the world, he was old and had known Evan Roberts, the driver of the Welsh Revival. Lord help me, beautifully written Brother. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Well, hang in their Brother Roy, one day you will be perfect like me!
LOL Love you brother! Dennis
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Hehehe, that?s a good one brother?perhaps one day.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
"Do not speak - unless it improves on silence." -- Buddha
I know what you mean. Some people don't know when to stop talking.
A beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words.
Good presentation Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.
Gypsy
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason. Novalis
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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"Do not speak - unless it improves on silence." -- Buddha
I know what you mean. Some people don't know when to stop talking.
A beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words.
Good presentation Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.
Gypsy
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason. Novalis
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your review. I believe balance is the key. Dennis
