Right Down the Middle
In golf not every shot goes ...6 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The game of golf takes you to many places. Clever how you used the word golf when things go bad. A lot of people say the opposite of golf which is the word, shoot.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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The game of golf takes you to many places. Clever how you used the word golf when things go bad. A lot of people say the opposite of golf which is the word, shoot.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Appprecite your thoughts
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed this. I'm not a golfer myself but I know golfers and it's a religion to them! This brings that to the foreground. I thought this was very creative. The repetition works well in your poem. It's a fun and enjoyable one.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed this. I'm not a golfer myself but I know golfers and it's a religion to them! This brings that to the foreground. I thought this was very creative. The repetition works well in your poem. It's a fun and enjoyable one.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thanks. Today, it is better I write of golf than play what once was my secret mistress who partnered with me to make beautiful shots.
Comment from Lady MJ
What an interesting way to express the love you have for your hobby. This makes a person stop and think about how deep is their love for their hobby. Our hobbies can and do engulf us and become a part of us in every way.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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What an interesting way to express the love you have for your hobby. This makes a person stop and think about how deep is their love for their hobby. Our hobbies can and do engulf us and become a part of us in every way.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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There was a time when it meant more to me but now I am glad to investigate what hides in the trees, and swims in the ponds. :-)
Comment from prettybluebirds
I found this poem hilarious. My brother plays a lot of golf, and I hear similar stories about his days on the green. Golf is not for me as I can't see much fun in chasing a little ball around. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I found this poem hilarious. My brother plays a lot of golf, and I hear similar stories about his days on the green. Golf is not for me as I can't see much fun in chasing a little ball around. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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There's no chasing. A golfer initiates motion and like a pilot the ball is in control once it leaves the box. Chasing it would be better but instead it decides to go hide for us to seek. Sometimes it wins, other times we lose. in other words the odds of winning are sparse.
Comment from Marienkiefer
Well, golf is not my hobby, what is your handicap (in golf).
Sparkling in your poem:
-Nice rhythm and structured
-Well versed vocabulary pertaining to your hobby and this sport
-You show the directions in which the g-o-l-f can go.
-Song lyrics and memorabilia to drive home point : stuck in the middle with you...
My favourite line:
-There was a time when my game was sublime, as I found the center of the club face regularly, which in turn placed my ball in the middle of the fairway.
A nice hole-in-one with this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Well, golf is not my hobby, what is your handicap (in golf).
Sparkling in your poem:
-Nice rhythm and structured
-Well versed vocabulary pertaining to your hobby and this sport
-You show the directions in which the g-o-l-f can go.
-Song lyrics and memorabilia to drive home point : stuck in the middle with you...
My favourite line:
-There was a time when my game was sublime, as I found the center of the club face regularly, which in turn placed my ball in the middle of the fairway.
A nice hole-in-one with this poem.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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My Handicaps are age, playing at rather than playing the game, and too many surgeries. H.C. currently 9. Thank you.
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Comment from Rebel Jim
I really like your little ditty.....
Reminds me of my father in his later years.
I don't see any problems ( for what it's worth ).
Tried it with him..... He whooped my ass!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I really like your little ditty.....
Reminds me of my father in his later years.
I don't see any problems ( for what it's worth ).
Tried it with him..... He whooped my ass!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your read
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