Her Smile
God's handiwork.3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This romantic poem, Her Smile, directs the reader to the beacon that draws the admirer in to then hear the notes that are issued from that pearled portal.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This romantic poem, Her Smile, directs the reader to the beacon that draws the admirer in to then hear the notes that are issued from that pearled portal.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I think a smile is fundamental - it makes somebody simultaneously look friendly and, by extension, more approachable (even more attractive). I thought this was a beautiful little piece.
Mike
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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I think a smile is fundamental - it makes somebody simultaneously look friendly and, by extension, more approachable (even more attractive). I thought this was a beautiful little piece.
Mike
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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You and me both. Hence the tragedy of COVID. Smiles missed.
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Good work. Whoever is the subject will certainly feel the love. You may want to reconsider word choices in a couple instances, e.g., when "forged" is the verb, either a tool or a quality of God (vision, artistry) may be more appropriate than "artwork".
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Good work. Whoever is the subject will certainly feel the love. You may want to reconsider word choices in a couple instances, e.g., when "forged" is the verb, either a tool or a quality of God (vision, artistry) may be more appropriate than "artwork".
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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I appreciate that. Thank you
