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Ways To Be Affectionate

There are so many ways.

3 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet, you have 2 votes now!

There are many types of love eg:

Agape : universal

Philia: love between friends

Storge : Familial love

Philautia : love for one self.

You didn't mention romantic love but I didn't miss it seeing you offered many good examples that cover some of the other different types of love.

Stay safe!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    Thanks. I do have poems in two contests.
reply by tempeste on 03-Oct-2022
    I voted for master chef.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    Ok
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a good entry into the Love Poem contest excluding certain words. It's a poem that covers a lot of ground using numerous ways to show love to another. It's colorful, and I love color. The text is easy to read. The message is great. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
    thanks
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 01-Oct-2022
    You are welcome.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
    ok
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
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Yes I like that kindness that comes through. In your future writings maybe listen to the flow, as you read it, if if feels like it is freely dancing through your lips. Then in my opinion the flow is perfect! Best of Luck. Keep writing. Keep sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
    Really, this deserves a better than good rating, it doesn't matter about the feet!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
    I changed four lines in the poem. I hope you think it is better now!!!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
    Yes definitely, thanks for changing the review.