This Life Is A Test
We should live the best we can.3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
You have you first vote .
The words TEST and QUEST describe well the meaning of life for a believer which obviously you are.
The Bible , God s word shows us the way to his eternal reign.
He sent his son Jesus to Atone for our sins and spread HIS teachings.
He is there to help us if we fall but we must surrender out heart to HIM.
Best of luck in the contest.
Keep safe
Ciao !
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Ciao !
You have you first vote .
The words TEST and QUEST describe well the meaning of life for a believer which obviously you are.
The Bible , God s word shows us the way to his eternal reign.
He sent his son Jesus to Atone for our sins and spread HIS teachings.
He is there to help us if we fall but we must surrender out heart to HIM.
Best of luck in the contest.
Keep safe
Ciao !
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks a lot!Th
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I hope to hear from you.
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I hope you have a great week!
Comment from lancellot
Well, yes, I can see how spiritual and some non-spiritual people will find this to be the meaning of life. Do the simple things and follow what they believe God's plan is.
-I would suggest changing the category of this to Spiritual, for all the God references.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Well, yes, I can see how spiritual and some non-spiritual people will find this to be the meaning of life. Do the simple things and follow what they believe God's plan is.
-I would suggest changing the category of this to Spiritual, for all the God references.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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okay, thanks for the review!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a beautiful poem that fits perfectly into the theme of the contest. Your word choices are excellent as the rhyme is natural and this flows so nicely. But most of all I enjoyed the message of faith that you share here. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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This is a beautiful poem that fits perfectly into the theme of the contest. Your word choices are excellent as the rhyme is natural and this flows so nicely. But most of all I enjoyed the message of faith that you share here. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks, the words you said mean a lot to me.