Where wind blows
A poem11 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
Fantastic post, dear friend :) Worthy of a ten! Your words stand true.
This is my favorite part:
For Christ had died and Satan lied,
my will is tied on faith relied.
But now I see with Him agree,
from sin's dark sea I've been set free.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Fantastic post, dear friend :) Worthy of a ten! Your words stand true.
This is my favorite part:
For Christ had died and Satan lied,
my will is tied on faith relied.
But now I see with Him agree,
from sin's dark sea I've been set free.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Thanks sweet girl you?re a lovely girl
Comment from BethShelby
You poem is neatly rhymed and smooth to read. :You seem to have told your conversion story in this poem. The winds changed for you and you became a new person whose eyes were opened to way things really were.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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You poem is neatly rhymed and smooth to read. :You seem to have told your conversion story in this poem. The winds changed for you and you became a new person whose eyes were opened to way things really were.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thanks Beth, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mabaker12
You write so many Roy I am able to read one at a sitting so I 'pick a number' Your poems are beautiful and thoroughly enjoyable. Don't think for a moment I don't judge all your poetry, I do , one by one. Sincerely Anne
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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You write so many Roy I am able to read one at a sitting so I 'pick a number' Your poems are beautiful and thoroughly enjoyable. Don't think for a moment I don't judge all your poetry, I do , one by one. Sincerely Anne
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thanks Anne, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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I tell the truth about writing Roy, mine and anyone else.
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You?re a good girl
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Ha Ha funny man Roy chuckle.
Comment from judiverse
Excellent work with the internal rhyme. Intriguing artwork. So true, you never know which way the wind will blow. Life is filled with uncertainty. There may be droughts and other setbacks, and you feel things are out of control. With God in your life, you will be set free. I like the positive tone. The Lord can help make sense of things. judi
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Excellent work with the internal rhyme. Intriguing artwork. So true, you never know which way the wind will blow. Life is filled with uncertainty. There may be droughts and other setbacks, and you feel things are out of control. With God in your life, you will be set free. I like the positive tone. The Lord can help make sense of things. judi
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Judi, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
Amen Roy! This is a very well written poem you have penned. You used very good and very true words and great scripture from John 3:3. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, teri
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Amen Roy! This is a very well written poem you have penned. You used very good and very true words and great scripture from John 3:3. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, teri
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Teri, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
So true and beautifully expounded upon and illustrated. I love the cool wind art. It's been quite windy here and now it has left and blown to another place. Oddly strange. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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So true and beautifully expounded upon and illustrated. I love the cool wind art. It's been quite windy here and now it has left and blown to another place. Oddly strange. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Sally, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Where Wind Blows, finds the winds of change working in the most profound way. What drive us away can then sweep us up in the arms of grace and eternity.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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This poem, Where Wind Blows, finds the winds of change working in the most profound way. What drive us away can then sweep us up in the arms of grace and eternity.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Bill, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This beautiful poem flowed like music. I'm sure the perfect rhyming scheme helped with that. I also enjoyed reading how this poem flowed into your personal testimony. Thank you.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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This beautiful poem flowed like music. I'm sure the perfect rhyming scheme helped with that. I also enjoyed reading how this poem flowed into your personal testimony. Thank you.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Barbara for the lovely comments and a kind review, blessings Roy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a beautiful poem. I love how the first two stanzas bring in naturally the final two that tie this all to the greater power. The flow of your poem is natural. Wonderful rhyme that is so perfect. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I thought this was a beautiful poem. I love how the first two stanzas bring in naturally the final two that tie this all to the greater power. The flow of your poem is natural. Wonderful rhyme that is so perfect. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Michael, for the lovely comments and a kind review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
Well done with all those internal rhymes as well as end rhymes. I like the transition to your testimony, the fruition of God at work in your life, even before you knew it.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Well done with all those internal rhymes as well as end rhymes. I like the transition to your testimony, the fruition of God at work in your life, even before you knew it.
Wendy
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Wendy, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
