a claim of a universe
the direction of the universe3 total reviews
Comment from TheLabyrinthMind
The format is intriguing here and the way lines connect is very thought-provoking at times. Who is claiming the universe I wonder?
I did have a hard time understanding the connecting theme. When reading, I could infer the direction from key words like science, universe and claim stake, but it wasn't clear how all those ideas connect. In a poem like this I would have wanted to see the culmination of an the different wordplay stanzas create more of an emotional connection.
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The format is intriguing here and the way lines connect is very thought-provoking at times. Who is claiming the universe I wonder?
I did have a hard time understanding the connecting theme. When reading, I could infer the direction from key words like science, universe and claim stake, but it wasn't clear how all those ideas connect. In a poem like this I would have wanted to see the culmination of an the different wordplay stanzas create more of an emotional connection.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
Comment from Abilene Riley
Very interesting. The experience of reading this felt quite new to me. It elicited the feeling that I was edging up next to an idea but never quite breaking through.
There are a few instances where you should make the word a direct action by adding an 's':
the future directs the future
and
science claims science
In this line, you have 'a' where it should be 'an':
in honor of an honorary science
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Very interesting. The experience of reading this felt quite new to me. It elicited the feeling that I was edging up next to an idea but never quite breaking through.
There are a few instances where you should make the word a direct action by adding an 's':
the future directs the future
and
science claims science
In this line, you have 'a' where it should be 'an':
in honor of an honorary science
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
