Comment from Maria Millsaps

Excellent

Yes, that pretty much sums it up. Christ above all things. I like how your passion comes through in this great written poem. Thanks for sharing. Good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022

Thank you so much, Maria.
The good Lord loves His
servants, and promises them
eternal salvation. Thank you
for the generous review.
Many blessings to you.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Author,

I really appreciated this tiny poem with a BIG message. *smile* I agree - serving the Lord daily and loving our neighbors is about the most important way of pleasing GOD and creating a life of fulfillment. Thanks a bunch! And good luck!

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

Thank you so much,
dear Robin, for the generous
review. Serving Jesus is the
most blessed way to live.
Hugs :))))

Comment from RodG

Good

This poem emphasizes how Christ gives our lives meaning through our being charitable and following His teachings. But please pay more attention to your punctuation. Commas should not replace periods.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

Thank you so much, Rod. I
really appreciate the 4 star
review. I hope you're doing
well, have a happy weekend