One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku Poem- excellent picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- interesting theme- lion surrounded by hyena's pausing in close proximity to watch the sun rise- lol clever- good job
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I like your haiku Poem- excellent picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- interesting theme- lion surrounded by hyena's pausing in close proximity to watch the sun rise- lol clever- good job
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Hugs!
Gypsy
Comment from Marienkiefer
A very nice haiku showing how two predatory competitors co-exist in the same place, under the same sun.
Lion and Hyena definitely are always in the same scene. Since they hunt according to daylight, or nightfall, they sure do have built in clocks too...
Thanks, Gypsy for your beautiful poem and nature scenes.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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A very nice haiku showing how two predatory competitors co-exist in the same place, under the same sun.
Lion and Hyena definitely are always in the same scene. Since they hunt according to daylight, or nightfall, they sure do have built in clocks too...
Thanks, Gypsy for your beautiful poem and nature scenes.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I seriously doubt Lions and Hyenas would stop to watch a sunrise, but I love the idea. I wish humans would pause and stop fighting. Thank you for sharing this beautiful Modern Haiku with and the hope of ending fighting.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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I seriously doubt Lions and Hyenas would stop to watch a sunrise, but I love the idea. I wish humans would pause and stop fighting. Thank you for sharing this beautiful Modern Haiku with and the hope of ending fighting.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Love it! Wouldn't it be marvelous if human fights could be stopped by people looking and admiring the wonders of nature? Great poem to help us take not and loved the pictures you chose!!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Love it! Wouldn't it be marvelous if human fights could be stopped by people looking and admiring the wonders of nature? Great poem to help us take not and loved the pictures you chose!!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Helen, yes, it would be great if we would cherish nature's beauty, realize what we have in common and forget our differences (((sigh))) love you, big sister.
Hugs!
Marival ❤️
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. Lion and Hyena are distracted by sunrise during fight. It must be a great sunrise. What a clever idea. I wonder whether they could see the color like we do.
Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Haha. Lion and Hyena are distracted by sunrise during fight. It must be a great sunrise. What a clever idea. I wonder whether they could see the color like we do.
Well done.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,,
This is a very nice sentiment in modern Haiku form.
The photo is really great too. I couldn't tell, buon hope I'm right when wishing you all the best in the Haiku club.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Gypsy,,
This is a very nice sentiment in modern Haiku form.
The photo is really great too. I couldn't tell, buon hope I'm right when wishing you all the best in the Haiku club.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Ms. Gypsy,
This a beautifully stated and presented poem. I like the idea that two very territorial animals would stop fighting long enough to appreciate the sunrise (even if it is unlikely). The visual fits perfectly and now you have cranked your presentation to another level with two visuals underneath the text. The spacing for the text and the visuals is well done. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Ms. Gypsy,
This a beautifully stated and presented poem. I like the idea that two very territorial animals would stop fighting long enough to appreciate the sunrise (even if it is unlikely). The visual fits perfectly and now you have cranked your presentation to another level with two visuals underneath the text. The spacing for the text and the visuals is well done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you, ms Sandy, yes, it would be great if we would cherish nature's beauty, realize what we have in common and forget our differences (((sigh)))
Hugs!
Gypsy
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Ms. Gypsy, you are most welcome.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Two of the fiercest enemies, who would probably never pause in their pursuit of the other, yet you give them some solace in your words. You allow them to pause for the beauty of the sunrise.
Very nice verse
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Two of the fiercest enemies, who would probably never pause in their pursuit of the other, yet you give them some solace in your words. You allow them to pause for the beauty of the sunrise.
Very nice verse
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Gary, thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
So, peace "dawns" on them!
Clever... Let's try that with humans now!
Think of the lives that would be saved if only!
I love your poems, always...
Those that speak to PEACE? A special thank you!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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So, peace "dawns" on them!
Clever... Let's try that with humans now!
Think of the lives that would be saved if only!
I love your poems, always...
Those that speak to PEACE? A special thank you!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and exceptional review, karenina.
Gypsy hugs
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Always my pleasure, Gypsy!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem reminds me of the Lion King. I have always liked this movie because there are many lessons to be learned from this movie. One of them is to be kind to one another, not mean!
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Your poem reminds me of the Lion King. I have always liked this movie because there are many lessons to be learned from this movie. One of them is to be kind to one another, not mean!
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs