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Resolution

There's still time....

3 total reviews 
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is indeed extremely amusing. The twist in the tail of your poem made me laugh (not just smile). We must share a very similar sense of humour. Thanks for adding your humour to this contest. Kate xx

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
    Thank you for the great review; since it's quite factual, a sense of humor is required!
Comment from Susan Newell
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Martie,

This is a hilarious poem. One step forward, two steps back. It reminds me of "The hurrier I go, the behinder I get." New Year's resolutions are great -- as long as they are completely ignored.

Sue

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Thank you; sad but true!
reply by Susan Newell on 28-Sep-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from lancellot
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Now, this is very important. This is posted in the Prose section, and at the end you write: Alas, the story of my life!

Though it has some rhyme, it is officially (according FS) prose, and no where near 300 words.

To avoid wasting your money and being disqualified. I suggest asking Tom to switch this post to the Poetry section.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Yes, it is a poem and I wondered why it presented as it did. How do I "ask Tom"?
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    thanks, I see what you're referring to and I have edited the submission.
reply by lancellot on 27-Sep-2022
    Send him a message (through the Contact Us button) with the name of your post and explain it should be in the poetry section.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    thanks