Come, Mine Harvests
Thinking about lost moments.4 total reviews
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
The background color makes it difficult to read. The font could be a little bigger also. The overall expression that you tried to reveal, was little difficult to follow and understand. Through some of it I felt some forced, descriptive words. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing. Good Luck
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The background color makes it difficult to read. The font could be a little bigger also. The overall expression that you tried to reveal, was little difficult to follow and understand. Through some of it I felt some forced, descriptive words. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing. Good Luck
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
Comment from Rena Smith
This is a beautiful poem and I like the rhythm of the words and how the words just flow together like a young couple in love dancing in the wind. This may have been before but, unfortunately this is not the case or outcome in the later part of this poem. But, I like the choice of words the poet chose and it's a good poem, thanks.
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This is a beautiful poem and I like the rhythm of the words and how the words just flow together like a young couple in love dancing in the wind. This may have been before but, unfortunately this is not the case or outcome in the later part of this poem. But, I like the choice of words the poet chose and it's a good poem, thanks.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a creative poem. You share a story and it's a deep one. The poem flows quite well and you have a unique storytelling ability. Great job.
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I thought this was a creative poem. You share a story and it's a deep one. The poem flows quite well and you have a unique storytelling ability. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
This sounds like a love that was lost because the supposed lover decides she had more life to live without the person who loved her. She waited too long to accept and he moved on. It seems to both of their pain.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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This sounds like a love that was lost because the supposed lover decides she had more life to live without the person who loved her. She waited too long to accept and he moved on. It seems to both of their pain.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
