Dear sun
Your journey and ours19 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
"you head home to rest
with smooth slide past horizon -
darkness here, light there"
Nice picture, Wendy and your words are a great entry for the contest. I like how you compare sunset to ending our life journey.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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"you head home to rest
with smooth slide past horizon -
darkness here, light there"
Nice picture, Wendy and your words are a great entry for the contest. I like how you compare sunset to ending our life journey.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Anne. I am glad you enjoyed this one. I always appreciate your encouragement.
Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Beyond Horizons, has the proper formatting and presents the calico sky, a patchwork of translucent and opaque moisture, suspended for viewing at the end of day. Nice.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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This 5-7-5, Beyond Horizons, has the proper formatting and presents the calico sky, a patchwork of translucent and opaque moisture, suspended for viewing at the end of day. Nice.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Bill. I am glad you liked this one.
Wendy
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You are correct, those who go to heaven will experience heavenly light and everlasting life. There is no need to worry or fear what is coming. Going to heaven should be a thrill. There will be no more sorrows or pain. No tears to shed. God will wipe the slate clean. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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You are correct, those who go to heaven will experience heavenly light and everlasting life. There is no need to worry or fear what is coming. Going to heaven should be a thrill. There will be no more sorrows or pain. No tears to shed. God will wipe the slate clean. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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What a lovely review, Carolyn. Thank you so much. I greatly appreciate it.
Wendy
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Thank you and you are welcome.
Comment from Michaela Moore
Here! Here! I agree. Oh, when I can finally leave this darkness and go to glory! We had a horrific murder happen in my community yesterday...senseless and took the only caregiver and money away from an ailing old woman with demetia. I have been poorly since.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Here! Here! I agree. Oh, when I can finally leave this darkness and go to glory! We had a horrific murder happen in my community yesterday...senseless and took the only caregiver and money away from an ailing old woman with demetia. I have been poorly since.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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What a horror! Unbelievable! Yes, I too am looking forward to going to be with Jesus. See you there one day ?.
Thanks so much for reviewing, always appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I often contemplate the very same thing Wendy when I think of you guys enjoying the sun during our darkness, an ambient write and you must be enjoying the sunrise just now, have a wonderful day, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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I often contemplate the very same thing Wendy when I think of you guys enjoying the sun during our darkness, an ambient write and you must be enjoying the sunrise just now, have a wonderful day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you Dolly. Yes being on FS makes one more aware of all those on the other side of the world.
Wendy
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a lovely haiku, leaving a sensation of restfulness. I love how you concluded your lovely analogy of light and darkness for life's journey and the anticipated homecoming now - and then. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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This is a lovely haiku, leaving a sensation of restfulness. I love how you concluded your lovely analogy of light and darkness for life's journey and the anticipated homecoming now - and then. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Verna for your lovely review, greatly appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this contest entry and, yes, this poem can shave numerous meanings and probably each meaning is relevant. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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I enjoyed reading this contest entry and, yes, this poem can shave numerous meanings and probably each meaning is relevant. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I greatly appreciate your encouragement, and good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a lovely job with this 5-7-5 for the contest, Wendy. Your well-chosen artwork sets the tone for the smoothness of this piece. I enjoyed reading it and wish you luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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You did a lovely job with this 5-7-5 for the contest, Wendy. Your well-chosen artwork sets the tone for the smoothness of this piece. I enjoyed reading it and wish you luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Melissa. That?s a very encouraging review.
Wendy
Comment from karenina
Perfect metaphor, divinely inspired! Every journey ends...
None of us escape the sadness of loss...
Ah, but in faith-filled hearts, we know we will meet again!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Perfect metaphor, divinely inspired! Every journey ends...
None of us escape the sadness of loss...
Ah, but in faith-filled hearts, we know we will meet again!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Yes, we do. A wonderful celebratory Wedding Banquet, hosted by Jesus Himself, for all nations of believers. See you there!
Wendy
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Smile. I hope I make the cut!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Wendy,
This is a lovely photo, and the words are deeper than they first appear. I'm sure you're more than ready to return home. It's always fun to get away, but even better to go home. I hope you have arrived safely.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Hello Wendy,
This is a lovely photo, and the words are deeper than they first appear. I'm sure you're more than ready to return home. It's always fun to get away, but even better to go home. I hope you have arrived safely.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Tom. Glad you enjoyed the layers of meaning. We arrived home an hour ago, just finished unpacking. Blessings upon you too, in abundance!
Wendy
