Haiku (beneath raging waves)
A water haiku for the club5 total reviews
Comment from RodG
You remind those who might not be familiar with the sea that two worlds often coexist in the same realm--on the surface a storm can be whipping up the waves, but deep below it an be very calm and serene. This is also a good metaphor for some people. Rod
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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You remind those who might not be familiar with the sea that two worlds often coexist in the same realm--on the surface a storm can be whipping up the waves, but deep below it an be very calm and serene. This is also a good metaphor for some people. Rod
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you for sharing your insights - this could apply to both the ocean and to people. What lies within could surprise us?
Comment from irishauthorme
A good expression of what goes on under the waves.
While scuba diving, I was always surprised at the tranquility when you reached a certain depth under the waves.
A good picture to set the mood, half of a fantasy nautilus?
Good work,
irish
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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A good expression of what goes on under the waves.
While scuba diving, I was always surprised at the tranquility when you reached a certain depth under the waves.
A good picture to set the mood, half of a fantasy nautilus?
Good work,
irish
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you for sharing your insights - this could apply to both the ocean and to people. What lies within could surprise us?
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Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Yes motion and light do not reach the ocean depths, regardless of the season. You described this wintry calmness in your posting.
Of course I like your Haiku format (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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June,
Yes motion and light do not reach the ocean depths, regardless of the season. You described this wintry calmness in your posting.
Of course I like your Haiku format (-;
Mark
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thanks, Mark! Serenity beneath the waves, serenity within our souls. The storms eventually pass. Glad you enjoyed this one..
Comment from Faith Williams
Your poem has lovely imagery. I especially like the contrast between raging and storming in the first two lines to serenity in the last line. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Your poem has lovely imagery. I especially like the contrast between raging and storming in the first two lines to serenity in the last line. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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I?m glad you enjoyed this water haiku. Serenity beneath the waves can reflect the serenity within our souls. Storms eventually pass. Thanks for sharing your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Love the picture for this one. A nice image in the poem can also be read as a metaphor of serenity in troubled times. Well done and I hope all is well with you.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Love the picture for this one. A nice image in the poem can also be read as a metaphor of serenity in troubled times. Well done and I hope all is well with you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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I?m glad you enjoyed this water haiku. Serenity beneath the waves can reflect the serenity within our souls. Storms eventually pass. Thanks for sharing your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.