A Divided World
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Comment from harmony13
I am so impressed with the author's words! The poem captured all that
I feel and many of us feel. I found the author addressing every problem
and discord our world is facing with details and prayers. Jay, you are
an exceptional poet and I look forward to more of your poetry as you
address this Divided World! Thank you, Maria
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I am so impressed with the author's words! The poem captured all that
I feel and many of us feel. I found the author addressing every problem
and discord our world is facing with details and prayers. Jay, you are
an exceptional poet and I look forward to more of your poetry as you
address this Divided World! Thank you, Maria
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from Brady Bowen
I can't "like" this because it is both bleak and true. I wonder if we aren't all propagandized to some extent...to believe things are worse than they are (they're pretty bad).....
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I can't "like" this because it is both bleak and true. I wonder if we aren't all propagandized to some extent...to believe things are worse than they are (they're pretty bad).....
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from amahra
Another fantastic poem Jaybird1. No, I'm afraid we're living in the last days where these things must take place until the coming of the Christ. But those of us who love and believe in Christ shall endure until the end.
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Another fantastic poem Jaybird1. No, I'm afraid we're living in the last days where these things must take place until the coming of the Christ. But those of us who love and believe in Christ shall endure until the end.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from June Sargent
It is a sad, sad situation man finds himself in these days. There is no way we can afford to ignore the issues caused by global warming. Is it too late to try to save the planet the future generations? Change is needed...
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It is a sad, sad situation man finds himself in these days. There is no way we can afford to ignore the issues caused by global warming. Is it too late to try to save the planet the future generations? Change is needed...
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from royowen
Scripture tells me these are the end times, the disunity in the community, the dissolution of the family, but the biggest problem, is we don't need God anymore, and it's His earth not ours, so His influence is being withdrawn. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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Scripture tells me these are the end times, the disunity in the community, the dissolution of the family, but the biggest problem, is we don't need God anymore, and it's His earth not ours, so His influence is being withdrawn. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have mentioned in your poem, many of the ills in our world and society. The violence of war is horrible, as well as crimes and violence we inflict on one another, making us afraid of people we don't know. Your poem states a very powerful message. Lord, "Have mercy on our troubled souls."
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You have mentioned in your poem, many of the ills in our world and society. The violence of war is horrible, as well as crimes and violence we inflict on one another, making us afraid of people we don't know. Your poem states a very powerful message. Lord, "Have mercy on our troubled souls."
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Jay,
This is a well rhymed prayer in a poem. It does seem like it may be getting close to be to late to reverse the problems humans have caused. We need good strong gun control and ways to make sure air and water can be purified for the future generations.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
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Jay,
This is a well rhymed prayer in a poem. It does seem like it may be getting close to be to late to reverse the problems humans have caused. We need good strong gun control and ways to make sure air and water can be purified for the future generations.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, the world is in a dreadful condition environmentally, politically, and socially. But like your poem directs us to pray for God's mercy and grace, we need to turn to Him Who is the source of love and peace. Thank you for sharing, Jaybird!
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Yes, the world is in a dreadful condition environmentally, politically, and socially. But like your poem directs us to pray for God's mercy and grace, we need to turn to Him Who is the source of love and peace. Thank you for sharing, Jaybird!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Mr Jay
I agree with you. Climate change is a real danger to our world. War has always being the worst in us. I hope things get better for all our sakes.
Gypsy
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Hello Mr Jay
I agree with you. Climate change is a real danger to our world. War has always being the worst in us. I hope things get better for all our sakes.
Gypsy
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
