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Nature's final fling

A poem

19 total reviews 
Comment from country ranch writer
Exceptional
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Life move in mysterious ways coming and going with seasons each year. Mother Nature performs her duty fir fall winter and spring being here favorite time of year, she brings us back the beauty, sights and wonderful smells we love of flowers.bring a smile ti our faces.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Beautiful picture and well-chosen words to describe the changes in he season. I love that last verse:
"For time will bring the Autumn change,
what winter's shadows re-arrange.
So do not fret when Autumn leaves,
reflect the summer's harvest sheaves."

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much Anne, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
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I enjoyed this post, Roy :) It reminds me of the new season of fall and all the beauty it brings. For me, fall means a fresh start and new beginnings. Time to reflect on mother nature and all the treasures God has created.

My favorite part:
The tree is master in the field.
Its beauty reigns, its branches shield,
all creatures shelter from the sun.
It's then I know what Christ has done.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Thanks for your grace and support Shana,
Comment from BethShelby
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It is true that death should not bring fear to those that know the Lord because death is not the end. We will be resurrected to live in a new state of existence. The changing leaves remind some of death but before they go they are beautiful.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much Beth, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
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It is true that death should not bring fear to those that know the Lord because death is not the end. We will be resurrected to live in a new state of existence. The changing leaves remind some of death but before they go they are beautiful.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Thanks Beth, for these first class comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
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It is true that death should not bring fear to those that know the Lord because death is not the end. We will be resurrected to live in a new state of existence. The changing leaves remind some of death but before they go they are beautiful.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Thanks Beth for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from DeboraDyess
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What a great perspective! I love the example of the tree and leaf. Though the leaf dies, the tree lives.
As always, a great Bible verse as inspiration!
Blessings
Deb

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
    Thanks Deb for these excellent comments and and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Using autumn as a metaphor for life and death is just brilliant.
Very beautifully presented with an artist's eye that draws your reader in.
Blessings,
Mary

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
    Thanks Mary, for these terrific comments and and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a glorious poem to go with that lovely autumnal picture, Roy. When I was reading your words about the autumn and winter, it stuck me how our lives follow that same route. We are born in the spring, blossom in the summer, crinkle and begin our change in the autumn, and are put to rest in the winter, but then the cycle starts again with our rebirth in Heaven, just as spring bursts with new life. I loved this, my friend. Excellent start to my Sunday morning. Love and hugs, Sandra. xxx

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much Sandra, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Roy,
I waited until today to comment on your awesome poem, so I could give a a well/deserved six stars.
I like 'death had set sin's sun'
and the image it elicits.
Your last stanza is stellar.
As always, I hope this note finds you well.
Wonderful work, Roy.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much Cindy, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 25-Sep-2022
    You?re welcome, Roy.
    Blessings