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Self righteousness

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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The only reason this is racist is because people say it is. It's getting to be ridiculous. It's the same when we laugh at our children and say, 'You little monkey' now that is racist. How did we get to the state? We have to be careful of everything we say now. Why should this company change the name when it is the founder's surname? Society has gone mad. Well done, my friend, this needs some commonsense, not bigotry. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks Sandra, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Changing the name of thing will NOT change the heart and that's were prejudice comes from. Stories like this upset me, because nothing will ever change, and it causes others to get upset. Thank you for sharing this poem.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks Barbara, for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Blaming a man for his last name and criticizing product names like "Coon" is SO ridiculous. We need to address racism--REAL issues of racism, not spend precious time on matters such as the one you've addressed. A product should not have an obcene or blasphemous name, but "Coon" is not . . . ! In line 1, "were" should be "where." Look at the end of line 6.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much Janice for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
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We've always eaten Coon cheese without ever a thought of racism or offending anyone. The man deserved to be recognised for his skills in making quality cheese. Changing the name of this cheese is not going to change the attitudes of those who are racist - they'll find other ways of being hurtful. Crazy to have to change the name of the brand of cheese!
Wendy

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much Wendy, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
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That is simply maddening! How can they take offense at someone's real name? He can't change his name for the sake of someone misunderstanding the name! What nonsense!

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks Helen for these super, comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I totally agree with you on this Roy. Those that call others 'coon' as a derogatory label, they are the ones that need to change. Too much of this nonsensical political correctness.
Were ( where) once we looked
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much Valda, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from damommy
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You cannot legislate human nature. There will always be prejudice of some kind. However, the political correctness has reached ridiculous proportions until now everyone is afraid to speak at all. It's a shame society has become so super-sensitive. I don't think it's that, though. It's a chance for these jerks to make a splash of some kind.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks Yvonne for these super comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Thomas Blanks
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Wow! Roy, you are a brave man. I recall when I was in the FBI. I used to get in trouble a lot with the boss. Finally, one of the other agents said to me, "You know, everyone else only thinks the things that you say." Over time, as I got older, I learned to pick when to say things. I still get in trouble. Just not as often. LOL. I think the same thing as you on this one.

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 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks Thomas for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your wonderful and beautiful poetry. It is well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Great job!

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 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thanks Raul, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy