My happy place is near the ocean
Whales entertain nearby10 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Nothing eases my stress and turns alk right with my world more than a visit to the ocean...
Sandy or Rocky, crowded or deserted, summer or fall...
It feels like home, although I'm nearly an hour away ...
Your words fit me like a glove!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Nothing eases my stress and turns alk right with my world more than a visit to the ocean...
Sandy or Rocky, crowded or deserted, summer or fall...
It feels like home, although I'm nearly an hour away ...
Your words fit me like a glove!
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you
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Thank YOU!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a lovely poem that sees nothing but the beauty in the sea, and I think I would see it that way myself, although not tonight. My grandson in Sarasota going through his first hurricane. The beautiful sea can also become a witch. Best wishes for the contest. I can guarantee you have one vote for sure. Mine.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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This is a lovely poem that sees nothing but the beauty in the sea, and I think I would see it that way myself, although not tonight. My grandson in Sarasota going through his first hurricane. The beautiful sea can also become a witch. Best wishes for the contest. I can guarantee you have one vote for sure. Mine.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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The sea can be very mean as well. Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Martie Zuckerman
Excellent job in utilizing the required words. I love the picture you painted and I agree with the premise; the ocean side with waves is my happy place.
I found comfort and smiles in your words. Well done and thank you!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Excellent job in utilizing the required words. I love the picture you painted and I agree with the premise; the ocean side with waves is my happy place.
I found comfort and smiles in your words. Well done and thank you!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Marienkiefer
A nostalgic poem. Readers are looking over your shoulder observing the scene with you.
My favourite lines: Whales splash their tails on the water and in the distance I see a sunset
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Buoys float on the ocean...
A picturesque poem.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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A nostalgic poem. Readers are looking over your shoulder observing the scene with you.
My favourite lines: Whales splash their tails on the water and in the distance I see a sunset
and
Buoys float on the ocean...
A picturesque poem.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. The image and color scheme worked well.
Your words were descriptive and put readers right there seeing
what you adore. I like the use of end rhyme and some internal
rhyme.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. The image and color scheme worked well.
Your words were descriptive and put readers right there seeing
what you adore. I like the use of end rhyme and some internal
rhyme.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much
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Thank you so much
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are inviting, descriptive, and creative. I enjoyed the
read of this poem. I found the words to describe a very special place. The rhyming scheme really stood out as I read these words. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with the words of this poem.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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The author's words are inviting, descriptive, and creative. I enjoyed the
read of this poem. I found the words to describe a very special place. The rhyming scheme really stood out as I read these words. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with the words of this poem.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from John Ciarmello
It seems you have followed the prompt well, and I wish you much success with the contest. I enjoyed the read and also love the ocean. You've hit on everything with fine imagery of an ocean scene. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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It seems you have followed the prompt well, and I wish you much success with the contest. I enjoyed the read and also love the ocean. You've hit on everything with fine imagery of an ocean scene. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you John
Comment from RodG
I can certainly understand why you call this sea scene your happy place. The fact you can see whales from shore leaves me awestruck. You used all the required words very well.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I can certainly understand why you call this sea scene your happy place. The fact you can see whales from shore leaves me awestruck. You used all the required words very well.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have only ever seen a whale once in the ocean and they are fascinating to watch, you brought their activity to life in your fine poem here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I have only ever seen a whale once in the ocean and they are fascinating to watch, you brought their activity to life in your fine poem here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you Dolly 🙂
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job writing this poem using the words provided. I also liked your rhymes. Your poem was actually serene. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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You did a great job writing this poem using the words provided. I also liked your rhymes. Your poem was actually serene. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much
