Jet-propelled Fitness
Full of beans provides the gas...9 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Since when did beans turn green? Peas, perhaps, and if a mind would stretch maybe Lima beans but all others I know are either brown, black or white. ............................
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Since when did beans turn green? Peas, perhaps, and if a mind would stretch maybe Lima beans but all others I know are either brown, black or white. ............................
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your review. String Beans or Snap Beans are definitely green... also ones called French Beans (Haricots Vert). You probably aren't a vegetarian?... more familiar with Mexican beans perhaps, while I live in New Zealand.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have chosen a very amusing picture, that complements your words beautifully. The line-end rhyme gives it a fun tweak. Good luck in the contest. Kate xx
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You have chosen a very amusing picture, that complements your words beautifully. The line-end rhyme gives it a fun tweak. Good luck in the contest. Kate xx
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from Michaela Moore
If only our cars ran on this type of gas! HA! This is delightful and full of cheeky fun! And I am always up for a cheeky laught. Good luck in this contest!
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If only our cars ran on this type of gas! HA! This is delightful and full of cheeky fun! And I am always up for a cheeky laught. Good luck in this contest!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from lancellot
Megan's a vegan;
lively lass eats up her greens -
always full of beans.
Yes, this is humorous and I like that you added the end rhymes to make it flow off the tongue. Good work.
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Megan's a vegan;
lively lass eats up her greens -
always full of beans.
Yes, this is humorous and I like that you added the end rhymes to make it flow off the tongue. Good work.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile and being vegan means you have to be very careful with your diet to include all the nutrients you need and Megan seems to have had success here, a fun post, love Dolly x
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This made me smile and being vegan means you have to be very careful with your diet to include all the nutrients you need and Megan seems to have had success here, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
Comment from BermyBye50
This write garnered a good chuckle. It is an excellent entry in the Humorous 5-7-5 poem contest. I'd search google for a hilarious pic of a goat in a boat to add to this post. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
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This write garnered a good chuckle. It is an excellent entry in the Humorous 5-7-5 poem contest. I'd search google for a hilarious pic of a goat in a boat to add to this post. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 5-7-5 humorous poem. The text size is great. I love that your poem is so colorful. The text made me chuckle because we know what excessive eating of beans lead to. The visual is whimsical and fits the mood/tone of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a good 5-7-5 humorous poem. The text size is great. I love that your poem is so colorful. The text made me chuckle because we know what excessive eating of beans lead to. The visual is whimsical and fits the mood/tone of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
Comment from jessizero
I liked your humorous 5-7-5 poem. I loved your rhymes, too! "Always full of beans" is a very funny line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I liked your humorous 5-7-5 poem. I loved your rhymes, too! "Always full of beans" is a very funny line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
Comment from Sally Law
Yes, this is fun and full of laughing gas! A hoot and a holler, mystery poet! I see a winner here! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :)))
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Yes, this is fun and full of laughing gas! A hoot and a holler, mystery poet! I see a winner here! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :)))
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
