The Pleasure of Pizza
In the hands of a clumsy child.18 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a neatly constructed, perfectly triangular nonet on the subject of an Italian dish that has certainly taken Britain by storm and now New Zealand as well it seems.
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This is a neatly constructed, perfectly triangular nonet on the subject of an Italian dish that has certainly taken Britain by storm and now New Zealand as well it seems.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. Only children can be so excited about pizzas nowadays. I can two small slices of pizza per week nowadays and sourdough crust, please.
Very few people can have bread here in the US.
I like the optional rhyming.
Well done and good luck.
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Haha. Only children can be so excited about pizzas nowadays. I can two small slices of pizza per week nowadays and sourdough crust, please.
Very few people can have bread here in the US.
I like the optional rhyming.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. How appropriate that the nonet's wedge-shaped form inspired a big piece of cheesy pizza! Great job with the shape as well as the internal and end rhymes. Best wishes in the contest!
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Lol. How appropriate that the nonet's wedge-shaped form inspired a big piece of cheesy pizza! Great job with the shape as well as the internal and end rhymes. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Lisa,
Your nonet poem made me hungry.
your syllable count is good, you've chosen a delectable photo,
And your words capture the essence of pizza.
Nice work, Lisa.
Stay well.
Happy Spring!
Cindy
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Lisa,
Your nonet poem made me hungry.
your syllable count is good, you've chosen a delectable photo,
And your words capture the essence of pizza.
Nice work, Lisa.
Stay well.
Happy Spring!
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A cute and delightful poem. Often kids (and adults) find their pizza slipping away to the floor! I have had a few slippery pieces myself.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
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A cute and delightful poem. Often kids (and adults) find their pizza slipping away to the floor! I have had a few slippery pieces myself.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
Comment from poetwatch
Memories of our younger self are a treasure we hold dear, Jenny. :) That pizza looks yummy, but, Where's the beef? I don't eat sausage, I love extra cheese and all the veggies. :) This is a good entry for the Nonet Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing.
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Memories of our younger self are a treasure we hold dear, Jenny. :) That pizza looks yummy, but, Where's the beef? I don't eat sausage, I love extra cheese and all the veggies. :) This is a good entry for the Nonet Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
Comment from Michelle Oden
Cute poem. It describes the pizza well and the way it's printed to be the shape of a slice is nice also. Overall good job on this entry. Keep up the good work.
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Cute poem. It describes the pizza well and the way it's printed to be the shape of a slice is nice also. Overall good job on this entry. Keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
Comment from jessizero
I like the way your poem looks like a slice of pizza. You used good descriptions in this poem. It makes me want pizza, and I just had pizza last night! Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I like the way your poem looks like a slice of pizza. You used good descriptions in this poem. It makes me want pizza, and I just had pizza last night! Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
