Falling from a Tree
a fifty-ish-word story5 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Bill,
I like this 50-ish words story. It's chaos is kind of symbolic of my life. ð???.
It has a lovely avant-garde style. The fan art review painting complements your poem well.
Good luck with all of your work, Bill.
Stay well.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Bill,
I like this 50-ish words story. It's chaos is kind of symbolic of my life. ð???.
It has a lovely avant-garde style. The fan art review painting complements your poem well.
Good luck with all of your work, Bill.
Stay well.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Cindy
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You?re welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and very cute story you have penned about the escaped monkey fall from a tree and died. You used very cute imagery. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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This is a very interesting and very cute story you have penned about the escaped monkey fall from a tree and died. You used very cute imagery. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Did the monkey eat all the snails? What will Chase do when he gets those calls? I wondered if this was a tale that used every letter of the alphabet but it doesn't have a "v" or a "q" so that wasn't it.
escargo at the French restaurant. (escargot) Yes, French has lots of letters they don't pronounce at the end of words!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Lol! Did the monkey eat all the snails? What will Chase do when he gets those calls? I wondered if this was a tale that used every letter of the alphabet but it doesn't have a "v" or a "q" so that wasn't it.
escargo at the French restaurant. (escargot) Yes, French has lots of letters they don't pronounce at the end of words!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Would you believe I had escargot spelled correctly but changed it so you could find a. misspelled word? I didn?t, but you did count all the letters.
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😂 Yes, thank you for making sure I had some spelling to find. How could I call myself a reviewer otherwise?
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This has got to be the most unusual story I have read this week. lol I like how you overlapped Chase as a name and as an action to catch the monkey. Your word escargot is misspelled. The plot needs to be developed better.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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This has got to be the most unusual story I have read this week. lol I like how you overlapped Chase as a name and as an action to catch the monkey. Your word escargot is misspelled. The plot needs to be developed better.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Sandra, for even looking at this. Bill
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You are welcome.
Comment from nomi338
If I were Chase, I would tell you to stop calling me and catch the damn monkey and hold him until can get there. Otherwise, do not engage. Now that he appears to be dead, call SPCA and disappear less you be charged with his death.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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If I were Chase, I would tell you to stop calling me and catch the damn monkey and hold him until can get there. Otherwise, do not engage. Now that he appears to be dead, call SPCA and disappear less you be charged with his death.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Why did the monkey fall out of the tree? It was dead. Come on! That was a quiz.
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As I said, call SPCA and disappear, lest you be charged in the monkey's death.
