One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from karenina
Well, isn't this enough to give a child, (or me) nightmares from now until All Hallow's Eve? My husband loves horror movies and I'm (wait for it)...
HORRIFIED by them!
In this context, however, I appreciate the Naani form being used in a unique manor, and after all, it was a Halloween contest, so you went for it!
(I'll just jot down that title as one I'll refrain from seeing!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Well, isn't this enough to give a child, (or me) nightmares from now until All Hallow's Eve? My husband loves horror movies and I'm (wait for it)...
HORRIFIED by them!
In this context, however, I appreciate the Naani form being used in a unique manor, and after all, it was a Halloween contest, so you went for it!
(I'll just jot down that title as one I'll refrain from seeing!)
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I'm with your husband on this one, I love horror! LoL
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Love you
Gypsy Queen
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
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The odd thing is I enjoy reading it, but watching it gets to be too freaky for me!
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....yes indeed, this is the Dean Kuch time of year....fired his imagination: inspired his stories of the dar corners of the macabre
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....yes indeed, this is the Dean Kuch time of year....fired his imagination: inspired his stories of the dar corners of the macabre
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Yes, I miss him sometimes. He loved Halloween.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I know this is a poem, but I do feel there are many predators out on days like Halloween whose sole purpose to hurt children. I like seeing parents with the children. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I know this is a poem, but I do feel there are many predators out on days like Halloween whose sole purpose to hurt children. I like seeing parents with the children. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Yes, you're right. It's very scary. Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest, Gypsy. The two pictures were fantastic. Your words showed that there is something else delightful to eat-little children. Great job. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest, Gypsy. The two pictures were fantastic. Your words showed that there is something else delightful to eat-little children. Great job. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs (*<>*)
Gypsy
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Naani poem- excellent picture presentation- good syllable count- good connection- excellent notes with references - does remind of the dark side - when Halloween was ruined - stories of sick people putting razor blades in Apples - evil exists to destroy innocence - never was the same again- good job-
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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I like your Naani poem- excellent picture presentation- good syllable count- good connection- excellent notes with references - does remind of the dark side - when Halloween was ruined - stories of sick people putting razor blades in Apples - evil exists to destroy innocence - never was the same again- good job-
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from jessizero
This was actually a very scary poem. You wrote it well. The beast stalking the streets looking for children to eat is a terrifying image. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This was actually a very scary poem. You wrote it well. The beast stalking the streets looking for children to eat is a terrifying image. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis
Comment from lyenochka
That's so appropriate for a Halloween poem! But of course, the best part is your tribute to Dean as he loved his horror movies and writing horror poems. Thanks for keeping his memory alive here!!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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That's so appropriate for a Halloween poem! But of course, the best part is your tribute to Dean as he loved his horror movies and writing horror poems. Thanks for keeping his memory alive here!!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Dean and I shared our love of horror movies, stories, poems.... everything horror.
Thank you, Helen. I'm happy you like it. Love you.
Marival ❤️
