I Will Make Peace
Contest Entry6 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
An admirable aim Raul. If everyone felt the same the world would certainly be a better place. I hope you manage to stick with it, even when the going gets tough. Thanks for joining in this contest. Kate xx
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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An admirable aim Raul. If everyone felt the same the world would certainly be a better place. I hope you manage to stick with it, even when the going gets tough. Thanks for joining in this contest. Kate xx
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the review and you're welcome!
Comment from Rena Smith
I like this poem because it is a motivational poem and the writer encourages the reader. It's a good poem. The writer also gives the reader a small positive glimpse concerning who he is or some portion of what he stands for and I like that.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I like this poem because it is a motivational poem and the writer encourages the reader. It's a good poem. The writer also gives the reader a small positive glimpse concerning who he is or some portion of what he stands for and I like that.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review!
Comment from nomi338
To be a peacemaker is to be like the Christ. For Jesus always sought peace and taught the value of being peaceable and being a peace maker. If you seek peace, you will be welcome in the preferred places.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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To be a peacemaker is to be like the Christ. For Jesus always sought peace and taught the value of being peaceable and being a peace maker. If you seek peace, you will be welcome in the preferred places.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Your thoughts as depicted in this verse are evident throughout all of your writings. You must be a very peaceful kinda guy, with many loving friends.
Glad to have you sharing with the FS population.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Your thoughts as depicted in this verse are evident throughout all of your writings. You must be a very peaceful kinda guy, with many loving friends.
Glad to have you sharing with the FS population.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Raul....sounds good in theory but in practice it's not that cut and dries, believe me, I know of which I speak, having years of practice!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Another fine poem, Raul....sounds good in theory but in practice it's not that cut and dries, believe me, I know of which I speak, having years of practice!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you, my friend!
Comment from Boogienights
If you keep to this resolution I think the rest of the year will be smooth sailing. I wish there were more people like you who are committed to peace. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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If you keep to this resolution I think the rest of the year will be smooth sailing. I wish there were more people like you who are committed to peace. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much, my friend! This means a lot! 🙂
