Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

Ahh, I so miss reading your work, Gordon, my talented friend. I savor every word while my eye's thoughts never leave the page. You are prolific, and with your non-ponderousness style, your words lift from the page. I adore your work, my friend. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022

Thanks for your valuable input my friend.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is a creative poem. Love the thought you seem to put into each word written. It is unique and very enjoyable to read. I think some of it went over my head but enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022

Thank ever so much for reading and liking my poetry, your input matters.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is so romantic and deep as all your poetry is. I so enjoyed this and the layers of metaphors alluding to so much more. A masterful write!

Sending my best today as always, dear Gordon,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022

Sending you happy blessings Sally.