Honoring others
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Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You did a great job with this tribute to a fantastic woman. I want to wish her great success with her writing. She seems like a great woman. Thank you for sharing this story with everyone on Fanstory. Have a great evening.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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You did a great job with this tribute to a fantastic woman. I want to wish her great success with her writing. She seems like a great woman. Thank you for sharing this story with everyone on Fanstory. Have a great evening.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Awe, thanks so very much Carolyn. I hope Sally reads your lovely review and t am sure it will mean as much to her.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very true poem you have penned about our Sally! Everything you have said is so true. I did not know about the books she had written. That is super amazing. Thank you for sharing this with us. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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This is a very beautiful and very true poem you have penned about our Sally! Everything you have said is so true. I did not know about the books she had written. That is super amazing. Thank you for sharing this with us. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so very much Teri! It seems that many didn't know about her books.she seemed very happy with the fact that I added them to my tribute. Your kind words will mean as much to Sally as they do to me! As always you are so lovely and I thank you again my friend!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I don't know Sal, but she is lucky to have a friend who thinks so highly of her. The text size is great. The verses have consistent rhyme schemes. I like the repeated refrain at the end of each stanza/verse. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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I don't know Sal, but she is lucky to have a friend who thinks so highly of her. The text size is great. The verses have consistent rhyme schemes. I like the repeated refrain at the end of each stanza/verse. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so very much Sandra! Maybe now that you have heard of her you might want to check out her work..Your kind words will mean as much to Sally as they do to me. I thank you again my friend!
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You are welcome. I will check her out.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a wonderful tribute to a sweet person -- indeed, Sally Law is an inspiration and your poem speaks to her courage and talent beautifully.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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What a wonderful tribute to a sweet person -- indeed, Sally Law is an inspiration and your poem speaks to her courage and talent beautifully.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so very much Dawn. Your kind words will mean as much to Sally as they do to me. I thank you again my friend!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your tribute to Sally Law was awesome, Mystery Author.
I agreed with everything you mentioned. She's a super
lady to know. Her writing's great, too. Your words were
well thought out and descriptive. I liked the great rhymes
and smooth flow. I liked the repeated line about 'our gal Sal.'
She is an asset to FS and to anyone who knows her.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Your tribute to Sally Law was awesome, Mystery Author.
I agreed with everything you mentioned. She's a super
lady to know. Her writing's great, too. Your words were
well thought out and descriptive. I liked the great rhymes
and smooth flow. I liked the repeated line about 'our gal Sal.'
She is an asset to FS and to anyone who knows her.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you so very much for your great review and such kind.comments Jan. I can't tell you how very much I appreciate your gift of six stars my dear friend! Yes Sally is among some of my best friends here and I plan on getting to them all. Thank you again!!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A wonderful tribute to Sally in a very well written verse.
You are so right in that she is an asset to all who know not only her writing but for her sweetness and faith.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for the tribute to such an amazing person.
Best regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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A wonderful tribute to Sally in a very well written verse.
You are so right in that she is an asset to all who know not only her writing but for her sweetness and faith.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for the tribute to such an amazing person.
Best regards,
Mary
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so very much Mary! She truly is a woman of faith and so much love for others. Your kind words will mean as much to Sally as they do to me! As always you are so lovely and I thank you again my friend!
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a wonderful tribute to a wonderful lady. Obviously Sally has an extra amount of creativity, determination, faith, and love. We are blessed at FanStory to have her among us. The poem tells it well.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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This is a wonderful tribute to a wonderful lady. Obviously Sally has an extra amount of creativity, determination, faith, and love. We are blessed at FanStory to have her among us. The poem tells it well.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so very much Verna! Your kind words will mean as much to Sally as they do to me! As always you are so lovely and I thank you again my friend!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Mystery poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your contest entry, nice rhymes and a nice tribute to Sally Law. Good job and good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Hello Mystery poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your contest entry, nice rhymes and a nice tribute to Sally Law. Good job and good luck!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for your very kind words for Sally and my poem.
I know she too will appreciate it as well.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Awe, what a sweet, sweet poem. I'm loving these interviews and poems about the people here on Fanstory. When I first started on here several years ago, it was random to get to know more about the writers. Sometimes just knowing a person's life helps bring their writing to life, to give it authenticity. One possible spag. Maybe should be two separate words in this case. "It may be impossible ..."
Anyway, great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Awe, what a sweet, sweet poem. I'm loving these interviews and poems about the people here on Fanstory. When I first started on here several years ago, it was random to get to know more about the writers. Sometimes just knowing a person's life helps bring their writing to life, to give it authenticity. One possible spag. Maybe should be two separate words in this case. "It may be impossible ..."
Anyway, great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so very much Gretchen! I really appreciate your feedback and I did change that a few other things. Your kind words will mean as much to Sally as they do to me! As always you are so lovely and I thank you again my friend!
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very well written poem and I enjoyed reading it. I liked the font and the style of writing as well as the theme. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This is a very well written poem and I enjoyed reading it. I liked the font and the style of writing as well as the theme. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for your very kind words for my. poem!
It is so appreciated my friend
