The Book of Sorrows
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2 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is well written and has an interesting flow. (The Rose) The son and wife part are sad and I am sorry for your lose. Poetry and writing are great ways to express ones sorrows, as well as joy, and other basic emotions. Let it flow, brother, let it flow. Nice work. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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This is well written and has an interesting flow. (The Rose) The son and wife part are sad and I am sorry for your lose. Poetry and writing are great ways to express ones sorrows, as well as joy, and other basic emotions. Let it flow, brother, let it flow. Nice work. Keep it up.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your review again and your wonderful comments here.
Occasionally I like to bring my passed and Blessed wife back in the form of a beautiful rose.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was terrific and a departure from what I've read from you in the past. It's a great start to your book. It's still poetic but I like the imagery that your writing is providing us.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I thought this was terrific and a departure from what I've read from you in the past. It's a great start to your book. It's still poetic but I like the imagery that your writing is providing us.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thabks Michael.
And, it's always nice to see positive reactions when you're producing something new here on Fanstory.
And as always,
Have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky1024
