Request Impossible
Having some fun with the title. Read to connect the dots. HA27 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
It is interesting and entertaining to read. I have enjoyed reading your creative poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Good luck! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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It is interesting and entertaining to read. I have enjoyed reading your creative poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Good luck! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for the feedback!
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Thank you so much for the feedback!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the 5-7-5 contest. The message is clear, but the readers must struggle to read the pale words on the second line. You need to make them darker for the reader or make all the text larger. Good luck in the contest. Glad you didn't use the first arrangement you had because it was difficult to figure out the lines.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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This is a good entry to the 5-7-5 contest. The message is clear, but the readers must struggle to read the pale words on the second line. You need to make them darker for the reader or make all the text larger. Good luck in the contest. Glad you didn't use the first arrangement you had because it was difficult to figure out the lines.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I appreciate the feedback!
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I appreciate the feedback!
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from royowen
There's one thing in life that is free, and thst is certainly love, it can only be given, it can't be excepted at a price, because if bought isn't love, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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There's one thing in life that is free, and thst is certainly love, it can only be given, it can't be excepted at a price, because if bought isn't love, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Roy.
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Thank you, Roy.
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A pleasure
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very interesting 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt entry. It was fun reading this also. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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This is a very well written and very interesting 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt entry. It was fun reading this also. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much!
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is so true. Love is free and untamable so it can't be roped.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
I like the artwork and the colorful font.
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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This poem is so true. Love is free and untamable so it can't be roped.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
I like the artwork and the colorful font.
Joan
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you!!
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Thank you!!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, I am glad you had fun with t, and though likely not the first, let me say you did indeed confuse me, until I read it numerous times and finally had to count to see the 5-7-5 within.
Try, and try again, and look at you, in the end you done did the impossible and got my vote.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Well, I am glad you had fun with t, and though likely not the first, let me say you did indeed confuse me, until I read it numerous times and finally had to count to see the 5-7-5 within.
Try, and try again, and look at you, in the end you done did the impossible and got my vote.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Yes I had to edit the actual lines after all that to make it literally 3 lines to follow the rules! Haha it?s probably an easier read if you look now. Thank you for your feedback!
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Yes I had to edit the actual lines after all that to make it literally 3 lines to follow the rules! Haha it?s probably an easier read if you look now. Thank you for your feedback!
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I reread it but you may have to move the last line up for if technically asking three lines you have four, no.
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It was 3, I changed the font size so that shrunk it to look like it should. How?s that?
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I knew what was to e. it just wasn?t
Comment from GWHARGIS
Your words could not be any truer if you tried. Money can't buy you love.it is absolutely free. Then why is it so hard to get? This was a clever and fun 5 7 5 poem. Your playfulness was spot on.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Your words could not be any truer if you tried. Money can't buy you love.it is absolutely free. Then why is it so hard to get? This was a clever and fun 5 7 5 poem. Your playfulness was spot on.
Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Gloria ....
How creative is this? Did you use some kind of writing tool, or are these new fonts that I am yet to find.
Great entry into this contest, and I can appreciate why you consider this your personal favourite so far.
Wishing you great luck in the booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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How creative is this? Did you use some kind of writing tool, or are these new fonts that I am yet to find.
Great entry into this contest, and I can appreciate why you consider this your personal favourite so far.
Wishing you great luck in the booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much! Yeah, it?s the fonts they have, cool, right? I had a blast. creating Art with some word art. Thank you!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
You have done a great job with the prompt, very creative!
This is a perfect example of a 5-7-5 verse, as the syllable count is correct.
The message is a positive one.
Although I appreciated your artistic flair and use of multiple fonts, it is hard to read.
Maybe consider a black background?
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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You have done a great job with the prompt, very creative!
This is a perfect example of a 5-7-5 verse, as the syllable count is correct.
The message is a positive one.
Although I appreciated your artistic flair and use of multiple fonts, it is hard to read.
Maybe consider a black background?
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your feedback!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-Notes are appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed writing it.
-What I get out of it is the request was to capture love.
-So the reply came, and love isn't available for free.
-Without repeating the word 'love' and making 6 syllables,
you put quotations marks at the end that look like another word is expected.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-Notes are appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed writing it.
-What I get out of it is the request was to capture love.
-So the reply came, and love isn't available for free.
-Without repeating the word 'love' and making 6 syllables,
you put quotations marks at the end that look like another word is expected.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Beautiful feedback and very appreciated thank you so much
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You are welcome. I appreciate your creativity.
