Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you now have your first vote.

I read your subtitle also

Back in the day things we made to last .. that included marriages, a relationships.

Today , too many love stories fizzle out , the younger generations are not willing to make the effort to solve issues.

They just split ( even if there are kids ) and move on to next failure.

I see your poem is written is present tense so your significant half is still by your side. He still makes you feel special

How many years have you been together?

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022

Almost 30.

reply by tempeste on 23-Sep-2022

I hope you have many more!

Doing anything special this weekend?

Do you live in a city or in the countryside, like me?

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022

In the city, in an apartment.

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022

Please review my 5-7-5 humorous poem, Imagine A Goat

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022

Are you ok?

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I appreciate your 5-7-5 love poem. I also admire your rhymes. I hope this is a true story. :)
Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022

Yes it is true, thanks!

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Good wednesday morning. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well with nice rhymes. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022

Thanks!