Rush of blood to the head
Life hardships overwhelming my mental state.30 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
Well.alright alright miss stewart! Fabulous poetic verse one line better than the last one constant movement had my total attention well done charity.
Note one typo:
misspelled hammock
Xoxo Judith
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Well.alright alright miss stewart! Fabulous poetic verse one line better than the last one constant movement had my total attention well done charity.
Note one typo:
misspelled hammock
Xoxo Judith
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Glad you loved it. My poetic metaphors. Jammock is a word its for jeep wrangler that resembles a hammock. Look it up. It's cool.
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Aaaaha. Okay. I got you.
Comment from Lilly Flowers
I think this is one of your best writings. All of your rhymes are fantastic, but I'll make special note of how you used manual and annual. Very poignant!
Must also make special note of the line about living life on the edge. Clever!
And the line about hitting the snooze button. What an amazing piece of work. Well done! Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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I think this is one of your best writings. All of your rhymes are fantastic, but I'll make special note of how you used manual and annual. Very poignant!
Must also make special note of the line about living life on the edge. Clever!
And the line about hitting the snooze button. What an amazing piece of work. Well done! Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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I'm glad you think this is one of my best writing. Thanks for your outstanding review.
Comment from SLMorrical
An awesome poem. I enjoyed reading it. I can understand how someone can be angry with everything that happened in the poem betrayal, drugs and so forth. Well done on this.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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An awesome poem. I enjoyed reading it. I can understand how someone can be angry with everything that happened in the poem betrayal, drugs and so forth. Well done on this.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your exceptional review.
Comment from write hand blue
Hi there Charity, a sad expressive poem. I can only imagine the inner turmoil of the writer. I can see there is the inherent talent of a poet here. The depth of expression is awesome. I hope you find some peace. Thank you for sharing. ~Mel~
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Hi there Charity, a sad expressive poem. I can only imagine the inner turmoil of the writer. I can see there is the inherent talent of a poet here. The depth of expression is awesome. I hope you find some peace. Thank you for sharing. ~Mel~
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from MissMerri
Charity, your poetry is so sad, and you assure me every line is truly about you, which makes me weep. I don't want to think about you being so miserable, and I hope it is at least, not all the time. We have talked before about solutions, but I'm not sure you believed anything I suggested would help. It is good to express yourself this way and I think you do an amazing job of getting feelings on paper. Hugs and love, MM
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Charity, your poetry is so sad, and you assure me every line is truly about you, which makes me weep. I don't want to think about you being so miserable, and I hope it is at least, not all the time. We have talked before about solutions, but I'm not sure you believed anything I suggested would help. It is good to express yourself this way and I think you do an amazing job of getting feelings on paper. Hugs and love, MM
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Poetry is therapy for me. Thanks for your feedback.
Comment from jaded831
Sounds like you needed to vent. Better here at Fanstory than out in the world. Life is what it is. I try to turn my negatives into positives. I like your poem because it is you, and we should always be ourselves.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Sounds like you needed to vent. Better here at Fanstory than out in the world. Life is what it is. I try to turn my negatives into positives. I like your poem because it is you, and we should always be ourselves.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Poetrt is therapy for me. Thanks for reading my poem.
Comment from Aussie
I read your lamenting with sorrow. Each day comes and we have control over it. The world turns and we must turn with it. Live and let live, give and whatever you send into the ether will come back three fold. If you ask for rocks you will get them; ask for roses and smell the love of God.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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I read your lamenting with sorrow. Each day comes and we have control over it. The world turns and we must turn with it. Live and let live, give and whatever you send into the ether will come back three fold. If you ask for rocks you will get them; ask for roses and smell the love of God.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your feedback.
Comment from royowen
I think one of the greatest breakthroughs in life is dealing with self image, and negative feeling, it came as a revelation, not to let one's feeling to be our master, they are our servants, we tell them what to do, and the last person on earth, is other people, whoever they, respect is something all should give one another, we are giving worth to others by doing so, no evidence of Christ or the Father doing anything else. But beautifully written Charity,, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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I think one of the greatest breakthroughs in life is dealing with self image, and negative feeling, it came as a revelation, not to let one's feeling to be our master, they are our servants, we tell them what to do, and the last person on earth, is other people, whoever they, respect is something all should give one another, we are giving worth to others by doing so, no evidence of Christ or the Father doing anything else. But beautifully written Charity,, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thansk my friend for your advice, wisdom and review.
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Well done
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Charity,
Thank you for sharing your experience with mental health. I am bipolar and have delt with it all of my life. I would add a link to medical health sources...
Substance Abuse and Mental Health Service Administration, U.S. dept. of health and human services click here 800 662 4357 -- 24/7 treatment referral and information service
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Hello, Charity,
Thank you for sharing your experience with mental health. I am bipolar and have delt with it all of my life. I would add a link to medical health sources...
Substance Abuse and Mental Health Service Administration, U.S. dept. of health and human services click here 800 662 4357 -- 24/7 treatment referral and information service
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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This poem is more about struggles in my life not all mental but it does affect you holistically.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Depression is hard to live with, but there are so many people out there ready to help these days. You need never be alone, if you really want to help yourself. I was helped, and was glad I asked for it. I hope you do, too. I really feel for you, as do many on here. It's hard, but you have shown you have the strength to write it down, which in itself is therapy. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Depression is hard to live with, but there are so many people out there ready to help these days. You need never be alone, if you really want to help yourself. I was helped, and was glad I asked for it. I hope you do, too. I really feel for you, as do many on here. It's hard, but you have shown you have the strength to write it down, which in itself is therapy. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your feedback.
