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Wanderer

Reflecting on growth amidst hardships

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Comment from HarryT
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I had to read several times. However, this little poem doesn't flow for me.
I know what you are trying to say. I wonder if it was stated as, "Maybe/I got lost yet/l'm found" makes more sense to me. Also in your explanation correction needed it appears as √???√??√?¬¢??Not all who wander are lost√???√??√?¬¢?? and √???√??√?¬¢??


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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
    Thanks for the feedback.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
    Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I think this could be subtitled rite of passage. Sometimes it does require going off the path and into the unknown to find yourself. Trauma can also bring out the true self. This was a great poem. You should market bumper stickers. You'd be able to retire. Lol.
Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
    That is an incredible and much appreciated compliment. Thank you so much!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
    That is an incredible and much appreciated compliment. Thank you so much!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Now how can one say with as many as one hundred fifty characters about seven words. I get the message, though I substituted Surely for maybe. and think but if surely is accepted would work better. idk. I am just filling in where I can get credit for a review. Be well.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
    Haha thank you so much, Tom.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
    Haha thank you so much, Tom.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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This is well written, constructive, and presented.

You have done a great job with the prompt, as this is a strong contest entry that I hope will do well.

The image mirrors the sentiment left, quite stunning!

I hope your readers will receive the message of hope.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
    Thank you for your reflection and kind feedback.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Reso.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I also like the font choices and the space before "Found."
-A good way to emphasize being lost, then found!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
    Thank you I appreciate the feedback!
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Sep-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from royowen
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What a marvellous saying you have made here. Yes, sometimes we get lost in the everyday malaise of life, but we finally realise there is little we can do, so sit back and enjoy the journey. So beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much for the time taken for feedback. I appreciate your words so much!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much for the time taken for feedback. I appreciate your words so much!
reply by royowen on 21-Sep-2022
    Most welcome
Comment from jessizero
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I really liked your 2-4-2 poem. I like that you combined the inspiration of two excellent quotes to make one creative work. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
    Much gratitude on my end for this! Thank you for such kind words.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
    Much gratitude on my end for this! Thank you for such kind words.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
    Much gratitude on my end for this! Thank you for such kind words.
Comment from Marienkiefer
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Very nice juxtaposition, that has the effect of taking thoughts further.

-In uncertainty there may be clarity.
-Beauty of simplicity is you get more meaning the more you consider it.

Good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much for this reflection and feedback you took time to write. Much appreciated.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much for this reflection and feedback you took time to write. Much appreciated.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much for this reflection and feedback you took time to write. Much appreciated.
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are thought provoking. I feel the author has said
a lot in this short poem. Thank you for the author's notes - they speak
volumes to me! I pondered on finding one's self and how being lost could
be the way to find it. The poem flows and connects well. Great Poem!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much for taking time out to give feedback and reflect on what you enjoyed and how you relate. It means a lot!!
Comment from Faith Williams
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Sometimes the only way to truly find yourself is to lose yourself. Lovely poem. Your shared quotes are appropriate--I like the first one especially. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    I really appreciate your feedback and positive encouragement. Thank you so much.