Blind
Closed minded27 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are so true! The words flow and connect well. I
pondered on these words and thought about how I sometimes don't see what's right in front of me! The artwork the author chose for these words is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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The author's words are so true! The words flow and connect well. I
pondered on these words and thought about how I sometimes don't see what's right in front of me! The artwork the author chose for these words is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Glad to meet you, though that may be "see you again." This is more than just words meeting the objective of the originator but actually precisely correct in what life bring to us each day. Overlooked surroundings, for sure.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Glad to meet you, though that may be "see you again." This is more than just words meeting the objective of the originator but actually precisely correct in what life bring to us each day. Overlooked surroundings, for sure.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments.
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You are more than welcome... or should that be welcomed? Never knew whether you can past tense that word.
Comment from Thomas Blanks
This 1-1-2-12 poem has the correct structure, an excellent visual, and double meaning. Sometimes, eyes are physically not functional; in other cases, people overlook what they don't want to address, or are perhaps blinded by love.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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This 1-1-2-12 poem has the correct structure, an excellent visual, and double meaning. Sometimes, eyes are physically not functional; in other cases, people overlook what they don't want to address, or are perhaps blinded by love.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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You got it, thank you for your review.
Comment from robyn corum
Jaded,
How very smart- even as it gently appears a bit tongue-in-cheek. This feels like one of those comments you could repeat in a crowd full of people -- where everyone nods their heads in agreement.
The kind of piece that everyone automatically is referring to someone ELSE. hehehehe A great message that EVERYONE should take to heart. This makes me think of so much that's going on with social media, too. Where people read two lines of someone's post and then start a tirade.
"Hello? Darling, if you'd read the whole thing you wouldn't be celebrating your stupidity before the whole Web-world." Ah, well. Let those nutsos behave as they will -- it only makes the people like me -- and yourself -- appear so, so, SO much more knowledgeable. And perfect, of course.
Yep. That's my story.... *smile*
Nice to meet you/read you! Congrats on the win!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Jaded,
How very smart- even as it gently appears a bit tongue-in-cheek. This feels like one of those comments you could repeat in a crowd full of people -- where everyone nods their heads in agreement.
The kind of piece that everyone automatically is referring to someone ELSE. hehehehe A great message that EVERYONE should take to heart. This makes me think of so much that's going on with social media, too. Where people read two lines of someone's post and then start a tirade.
"Hello? Darling, if you'd read the whole thing you wouldn't be celebrating your stupidity before the whole Web-world." Ah, well. Let those nutsos behave as they will -- it only makes the people like me -- and yourself -- appear so, so, SO much more knowledgeable. And perfect, of course.
Yep. That's my story.... *smile*
Nice to meet you/read you! Congrats on the win!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Your review was great. The end really made me laugh, you have a unique style. Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Jaded831 good morning a wonderful Thursday to you. Hope this day finds you well. Congrats on the 1st place win, you absolutely crushed it, the poem and picture go together perfectly and the message so true. Wonderful job!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Hello Jaded831 good morning a wonderful Thursday to you. Hope this day finds you well. Congrats on the 1st place win, you absolutely crushed it, the poem and picture go together perfectly and the message so true. Wonderful job!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Your descriptive words lead nicely into the final line.
-You make a good point about those whose eyes
are open, but they miss the points that are clearly in front of them!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Your descriptive words lead nicely into the final line.
-You make a good point about those whose eyes
are open, but they miss the points that are clearly in front of them!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Oh, how true. So on the mark. We can hear but do we listen? We can look but do we really see? Kinda scary picture of an eye. Reminds me of "images in the mirror may be closer than they seem."
Very nice.
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Oh, how true. So on the mark. We can hear but do we listen? We can look but do we really see? Kinda scary picture of an eye. Reminds me of "images in the mirror may be closer than they seem."
Very nice.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for your review.
