Blind
Closed minded27 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
This is a very impressive poem. That you came up with the 12 syllable count to comply and it fits perfectly with your first two lines is amazing. Great stroke of genius
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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This is a very impressive poem. That you came up with the 12 syllable count to comply and it fits perfectly with your first two lines is amazing. Great stroke of genius
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
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You're welcome
Comment from karenina
Hey neighbor! Who knew? I'm about a stone's throw away from you....in Agawam! My son lives in Springfield...
Maybe we could meet at a Dunkin's one day and chat poetry...
Very nice 2-1-2-12...
Congrats on winning the contest.
"None so blind as they that will not see"
----John Heywood, 1546
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Hey neighbor! Who knew? I'm about a stone's throw away from you....in Agawam! My son lives in Springfield...
Maybe we could meet at a Dunkin's one day and chat poetry...
Very nice 2-1-2-12...
Congrats on winning the contest.
"None so blind as they that will not see"
----John Heywood, 1546
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Agawam is right across the bridge from me by MGM. Thanks for the review.
Comment from HarryT
An excellent presentation with a fine complementary picture. Your meaning is clear, as you convey an important message in a few words. Your little poem makes one think. Nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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An excellent presentation with a fine complementary picture. Your meaning is clear, as you convey an important message in a few words. Your little poem makes one think. Nice job.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is well written, and presented.
I can see why it has earned the accolades that it has.
The message is, to me, one of honesty and denial.
Circumstances can present themselves clear as crystal, and it is a choice to either deny that it exists or embrace it.
Close mindedness is, in its self an affliction.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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This is well written, and presented.
I can see why it has earned the accolades that it has.
The message is, to me, one of honesty and denial.
Circumstances can present themselves clear as crystal, and it is a choice to either deny that it exists or embrace it.
Close mindedness is, in its self an affliction.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I agree. Thank you for your insightful review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I should send this to a friend of mine. This describes her to a tee. Always focused on what she doesn't have. Sees what everyone else has. I wish she could see her own bounty. This poem was a warning to all. Be thankful for all. Beautiful words.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I should send this to a friend of mine. This describes her to a tee. Always focused on what she doesn't have. Sees what everyone else has. I wish she could see her own bounty. This poem was a warning to all. Be thankful for all. Beautiful words.
Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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That is a unique and insightful review, thank you so much.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I saw this contest and wondered how one might pull it off. You did so well that you won!
Congratulations, well done with this challenging poetry contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I saw this contest and wondered how one might pull it off. You did so well that you won!
Congratulations, well done with this challenging poetry contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your encouraging words.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
So true. Congratulations, Jaded, on your first-place win.
Your presentation was well done in looks, formatting of
lines, and great and true message.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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So true. Congratulations, Jaded, on your first-place win.
Your presentation was well done in looks, formatting of
lines, and great and true message.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Your review made me smile, I thank you.
Comment from Lilly Flowers
You said it, girl! This reminds me of an old saying, "There are none so blind as those that will not see."
The image you chose is captivating and your words compliment it nicely. Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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You said it, girl! This reminds me of an old saying, "There are none so blind as those that will not see."
The image you chose is captivating and your words compliment it nicely. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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So true, thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from royowen
Yep, you're absolutely correct my friend, with naked eyes wide open we will never see as much as the alert inner eye, it covers the whole gambit, or at least the things that are out of the outer sight. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Yep, you're absolutely correct my friend, with naked eyes wide open we will never see as much as the alert inner eye, it covers the whole gambit, or at least the things that are out of the outer sight. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Your review means a great deal, I love your work.
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Bless you
Comment from jessizero
I can see why this piece won the contest! It's excellent, especially considering how much you said with so few syllables. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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I can see why this piece won the contest! It's excellent, especially considering how much you said with so few syllables. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much.
