The Annual Halloween Event
What lengths we go to...3 total reviews
Comment from karenina
The "editor" is apparently spooked easily. I reviewed this and about fifteen others last night and every time I hit save the review disappeared to planet "NOT-A-CLUE." ANYWAY, I'm back to say congrats and to compliment you on your right aligned poem which was a fine read and apparently a real pain in the jack-o-lantern to set up!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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The "editor" is apparently spooked easily. I reviewed this and about fifteen others last night and every time I hit save the review disappeared to planet "NOT-A-CLUE." ANYWAY, I'm back to say congrats and to compliment you on your right aligned poem which was a fine read and apparently a real pain in the jack-o-lantern to set up!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the nice review, and your persistence!
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Grrr to old computers! Glad it finally went through!
Comment from Susan Newell
I love this one, particularly the formatting and font choice. It's easy to read and appreciate the rhymes. You packed in a lot and I liked the idea of witches being able to go unnoticed on one day of the year. On the rare occasion that my husband picks up a broom, I ask him if he's going for a ride. He'll pause a moment, then say, "Not today. The ceiling's too low."
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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I love this one, particularly the formatting and font choice. It's easy to read and appreciate the rhymes. You packed in a lot and I liked the idea of witches being able to go unnoticed on one day of the year. On the rare occasion that my husband picks up a broom, I ask him if he's going for a ride. He'll pause a moment, then say, "Not today. The ceiling's too low."
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the nice review. I like your story too :)
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You are most welcome.
Comment from zanya
A sense of fun here in these stanzas, sprinkled with all of the paraphernalia of the Halloween event, engages the reader with a real sense of the shenanigans for 'The witches annual outing'
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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A sense of fun here in these stanzas, sprinkled with all of the paraphernalia of the Halloween event, engages the reader with a real sense of the shenanigans for 'The witches annual outing'
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thanks for a super review. Glad you enjoyed it.
