Under my tin roof
A comfortable feeling51 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the sound of a the rain on a tin roof, there is something soothing about it Willie, your write is atmospheric and I loved your chosen font to give this poem a sense of nostalgia, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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I love the sound of a the rain on a tin roof, there is something soothing about it Willie, your write is atmospheric and I loved your chosen font to give this poem a sense of nostalgia, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from godlucifer
sound of proof,sound of rain. relaxing is proof that we relax to the sound of a tempo. your poem was great in its own imagination. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
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sound of proof,sound of rain. relaxing is proof that we relax to the sound of a tempo. your poem was great in its own imagination. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from Ulla
Hi Willie, I agree with you up to a point. A tin roof is far to noisy and too intrusive. I prefer to be close to nature in a boat. The gentle tapping on the deck is rather soothing when you're underneath in the cabin, feeling close to the elements and nature. I liked your poem a lot. Ulla:)))
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Hi Willie, I agree with you up to a point. A tin roof is far to noisy and too intrusive. I prefer to be close to nature in a boat. The gentle tapping on the deck is rather soothing when you're underneath in the cabin, feeling close to the elements and nature. I liked your poem a lot. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
The rhythm and rhyme of this poem is so relaxing it gives the feeling that all is well. I've never experienced it, but I imagine the steady drops of rain could put one to sleep. Great poem and imagery.
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The rhythm and rhyme of this poem is so relaxing it gives the feeling that all is well. I've never experienced it, but I imagine the steady drops of rain could put one to sleep. Great poem and imagery.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about more relaxing sleep hearing the rain and thunder under the tin roof. You used great descriptive words. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written poem about more relaxing sleep hearing the rain and thunder under the tin roof. You used great descriptive words. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from Olivanne Marsh
The tempo of this poem is as relaxing as a gentle rain. I wish you'd included more sound description, especially as it relates to a tin roof. The sound of a soft rain on a tin roof, juxtaposed to the sound of a hard rain on the same location and the effect those sounds produce could be reproduced in poetry with alliteration, I think. The tempo of the rhyme could also change with the nature of the storm. Thunder and lightening accompanying a hard rain causes a quickening of emotion and seems less contemplative even in shelter. As a reader I think it would add depth to the experience of the poem as well as music. I am not a poet, so not suggesting you should do it, just something I wish you'd tried. I enjoyed reading the poem, however, and found it sweetly comforting.
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The tempo of this poem is as relaxing as a gentle rain. I wish you'd included more sound description, especially as it relates to a tin roof. The sound of a soft rain on a tin roof, juxtaposed to the sound of a hard rain on the same location and the effect those sounds produce could be reproduced in poetry with alliteration, I think. The tempo of the rhyme could also change with the nature of the storm. Thunder and lightening accompanying a hard rain causes a quickening of emotion and seems less contemplative even in shelter. As a reader I think it would add depth to the experience of the poem as well as music. I am not a poet, so not suggesting you should do it, just something I wish you'd tried. I enjoyed reading the poem, however, and found it sweetly comforting.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this comforting poem with us. The descriptions are excellent, and they provoke emotion within your readers. I enjoyed reading. I hope I catch more of your poems.
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Thank you for sharing this comforting poem with us. The descriptions are excellent, and they provoke emotion within your readers. I enjoyed reading. I hope I catch more of your poems.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I do like the sound of rain and agree it can be very relaxing. Your picture and the style of writing gives your presentation a homely look and feel. Well done, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. :)) Sandra xx
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I do like the sound of rain and agree it can be very relaxing. Your picture and the style of writing gives your presentation a homely look and feel. Well done, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from Melanie Brooke Gabbard
I like the imagery of this poem. It is very descriptive and evokes many memories. I am reminded of my own childhood when I read this, which shows that you know how to capture your readre. I like the repetition of "under my tin roof." Thank you for sharing.
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I like the imagery of this poem. It is very descriptive and evokes many memories. I am reminded of my own childhood when I read this, which shows that you know how to capture your readre. I like the repetition of "under my tin roof." Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from harmony13
I really enjoyed the author's words! They are descriptive and creative as they gave a of sense to the reader of relaxation, safeness and all is well. I could almost here the rain on the tin roof! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Thank you for the author's note - they speak volumes!
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I really enjoyed the author's words! They are descriptive and creative as they gave a of sense to the reader of relaxation, safeness and all is well. I could almost here the rain on the tin roof! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Thank you for the author's note - they speak volumes!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
