One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from karenina
Clever you!
Covid kept us from "swarming" for so long, I wonder if we have any "light of the party" in our midst anymore!
I'm praying things subside, so we can find our "groove" again this season!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Clever you!
Covid kept us from "swarming" for so long, I wonder if we have any "light of the party" in our midst anymore!
I'm praying things subside, so we can find our "groove" again this season!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Sister karenina
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Love you ❤️
Gypsy Queen
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
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You are most welcome! I'll try my best not to fall so far behind!
Comment from aryr
A great haiku, Gypsy. The picture was priceless, it showed the beauty of nature. Your words were an accumulation of the beauty. They showed the beauty of nature. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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A great haiku, Gypsy. The picture was priceless, it showed the beauty of nature. Your words were an accumulation of the beauty. They showed the beauty of nature. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs
Gypsy
Gypsy
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment from Mark D. R.
GBR,
An amusing conclusion to your nicely written 'modern' (sic) Haiku. Do like your color scheme.
But could this poem be considered more in the traditional Haiku format since fireflies IMHO does imply a seasonal element?
Mark
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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GBR,
An amusing conclusion to your nicely written 'modern' (sic) Haiku. Do like your color scheme.
But could this poem be considered more in the traditional Haiku format since fireflies IMHO does imply a seasonal element?
Mark
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the exceptional review and kind words. Hugs.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I wouldn't mind a swarm of fireflies, but right now, in this part of Texas we are having swarms of mosquitoes. Not a good thing. I enjoyed reading and the artwork you chose is beautiful.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I wouldn't mind a swarm of fireflies, but right now, in this part of Texas we are having swarms of mosquitoes. Not a good thing. I enjoyed reading and the artwork you chose is beautiful.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Oh, no, swarms of mosquitoes sounds terrible. You must use lots of insect repellent spray.
Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate your kind words.
Gypsy
"Think big thoughts but relish small pleasures." -Jackson Brown Jr.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and a cool picture----I don't think I've ever seen a firefly; Firefly was a sci-fi show back in the early 2000's--loved that show
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and a cool picture----I don't think I've ever seen a firefly; Firefly was a sci-fi show back in the early 2000's--loved that show
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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I love the firefly series. It's too bad they only had one season.
Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate your kind words.
Gypsy
"Think big thoughts but relish small pleasures." -Jackson Brown Jr.
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Unfortunitely, I only saw it after Fox had cancelled it when our neighbor brought ove all the episodes on a CD
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your modern haiku - Excellent picture presentation!! Good word count and connection between line. Clever idea for a poem - poems paints a clear picture of the topic - flows is good - poems comes together well - fireflies are always a welcome addition to a night scene - good job
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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I like your modern haiku - Excellent picture presentation!! Good word count and connection between line. Clever idea for a poem - poems paints a clear picture of the topic - flows is good - poems comes together well - fireflies are always a welcome addition to a night scene - good job
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate your kind words.
Gypsy
"Think big thoughts but relish small pleasures." -Jackson Brown Jr.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. That's funny. Yes, those fireflies are always the "light of the party." I wonder what other creatures are swarming during that part of the night. Fun summer haiku poem!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Lol. That's funny. Yes, those fireflies are always the "light of the party." I wonder what other creatures are swarming during that part of the night. Fun summer haiku poem!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Helen,
Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate your kind words. Besitos y abrazos.
Marival
"Think big thoughts but relish small pleasures." -Jackson Brown Jr.
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written 2-8-5 Modern Haiku. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written 2-8-5 Modern Haiku. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate your kind words.
Gypsy
"Think big thoughts but relish small pleasures." -Jackson Brown Jr.