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Fine Poetry

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Comment from Douglas Goff
Excellent
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I liked this! Beautiful use of imagery and it invoked mental images of various scenes in my mind. I think it added to the experience that I don't know these places. Writers write, so keep on writing! Good work!

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Yes I've pretty much scraped up every particle of sand.
    Yes, and painted every seashell I could find.
    Yes, to make this book.
    So, I guess it can be completed now?
    Opps!
    Another Seagull flew by!
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from country ranch writer
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Bulls know where tofu d a feast and the light house shines its lights at night ti warn of rocks and the sea sirens tying to temp sailors to crash their vessels into the sea.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
    This book is nearing completion.
    It's actually a combination of two.
    "Painted Visions" and "Beautiful Poetry from Long Beach Island New Jersey "
    Thanks again country ranch writer.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by country ranch writer on 19-Sep-2022
    Smiles