Cedar Breaks National Monument
Contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
The idea of a chewy toy ripcord release was brilliant as was the parachuting poodle on the bearskin rug. Well why not? We take them for walks, and we take them swimming. I've heard of them riding skateboards, so why not take them parachuting? You have two dogs? They can take turns - the one not parachuting flies the plane!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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The idea of a chewy toy ripcord release was brilliant as was the parachuting poodle on the bearskin rug. Well why not? We take them for walks, and we take them swimming. I've heard of them riding skateboards, so why not take them parachuting? You have two dogs? They can take turns - the one not parachuting flies the plane!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Pantygynt. The poodle was just a graphic design on Sam's parachute. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness, friend. Thanks again.
Ron
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
Yours is such a wonderful story!
I thought my dog did it all, until I read about your dog.
I love the breathless feeling I experienced, reading on and silently wondering how your canine jumper was going to land.
I liked the suspense and the sweet humor of your adventure.
Awesome story.
Good luck!
Cindy
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Author,
Yours is such a wonderful story!
I thought my dog did it all, until I read about your dog.
I love the breathless feeling I experienced, reading on and silently wondering how your canine jumper was going to land.
I liked the suspense and the sweet humor of your adventure.
Awesome story.
Good luck!
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Cindy. Just another story where I had to come up with something totally ridiculous to enter. Lol. I dearly appreciate the stars and kind comments, Cindy. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful day and thank you again.
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Ron
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You?re welcome, Ron.
Awesome read!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the A Visit To . . . . . writing prompt contest.
Your Dog Sam is very brave. I was worried he wouldn't open the parachute in time! Wow he is quite adventurous lol well done.
Goodluck in the contest.
"Happiness is an uphill battle. Wear the good shoes." -- Kurt Vonnegut
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Excellent entry for the A Visit To . . . . . writing prompt contest.
Your Dog Sam is very brave. I was worried he wouldn't open the parachute in time! Wow he is quite adventurous lol well done.
Goodluck in the contest.
"Happiness is an uphill battle. Wear the good shoes." -- Kurt Vonnegut
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Gypsy. Yeah, he's a fast learner. Lol. I really appreciate the stars. Plus, I love the quote. I'm glad you liked the piece, G. Have a great day.
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Ron
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I do not know if I like the artwork or the story better. I guess then I cannot separate them for their fun, creativity, and brilliance.
Good luck in the contest.
Best regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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I do not know if I like the artwork or the story better. I guess then I cannot separate them for their fun, creativity, and brilliance.
Good luck in the contest.
Best regards,
Mary
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Mary. To be honest, I actually like playing in my art program about as much as the silliness I write. Lol. The picture took a whole lot longer to complete than the story did, so if you liked the pic better, that would be fine with me. Haha. I'm glad you liked the piece, Mary. Thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
As a dog lover and dog owner. I loved this story about Sam and you wingsuiting or parachuting together. I love the details told with the excitement of a kid doing a fun activity with his dog. The story is in large font, so it was easy to read. I wish you luck in the contest. You have a great entry.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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As a dog lover and dog owner. I loved this story about Sam and you wingsuiting or parachuting together. I love the details told with the excitement of a kid doing a fun activity with his dog. The story is in large font, so it was easy to read. I wish you luck in the contest. You have a great entry.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. Yes, I'm more of a dog lover as well but at the moment we just have a cat. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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Ron
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Last time I checked your silly story (your words) was winning. I voted for it. You are welcome.
Comment from Annmuma
Great story! Very creative and even believable if one puts on their 'anything can happen' hat. lol. Meets the contest runs and, in my opinion, is a winner. Good luck. ann
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Great story! Very creative and even believable if one puts on their 'anything can happen' hat. lol. Meets the contest runs and, in my opinion, is a winner. Good luck. ann
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Ann. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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Ron
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Thirty two thousand feet? That's where passenger jets fly, and for an initial canine jump, that's too much for anyone but you. Going where no man has gone before. James T. Kirk .................
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thirty two thousand feet? That's where passenger jets fly, and for an initial canine jump, that's too much for anyone but you. Going where no man has gone before. James T. Kirk .................
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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I looked on line and guess I misunderstood passenger plane. LOL. I look at it as we were passengers. Haha. I lowered it by a ten thousand. Hopefully that's closer to the real deal for jumping out a plane. Thank you for the great review and stars, friend.
Ron
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In the recreational world of skydiving, jumping is most often conducted between the altitudes of 10,000 and 13,500 feet. Skydiving from above 15,000 feet requires the use of oxygen. FYI.
Comment from jessizero
This was another fun and creative post. I always enjoy seeing what you create for these prompts. Thanks so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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This was another fun and creative post. I always enjoy seeing what you create for these prompts. Thanks so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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I always try to go ridiculous with these prompts. Lol. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and stars, Jessi. I'm glad you like my silliness.
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Ron
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this humorous story.
You have done a great job with the prompt, very creative!
As a dog lover and owner, I was immediately drawn to the artwork.
Your writing is widely descriptive and engaged my senses throughout.
Your colorful vocabulary painted a clear picture to which I could experience the story from my perspective.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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I enjoyed this humorous story.
You have done a great job with the prompt, very creative!
As a dog lover and owner, I was immediately drawn to the artwork.
Your writing is widely descriptive and engaged my senses throughout.
Your colorful vocabulary painted a clear picture to which I could experience the story from my perspective.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for the great review, KLR. I'm a dog lover too but at this present time in life, I actually have a cat. What can you do? Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
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Ron
Comment from royowen
Don't you just love this, what a lucky dog, being taught how to skydive, and not only that but opening his parachute so he can land safely with his master, beautifully written my friend, now for bungee jumping, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Don't you just love this, what a lucky dog, being taught how to skydive, and not only that but opening his parachute so he can land safely with his master, beautifully written my friend, now for bungee jumping, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Roy. Yeah, I had to go the extreme again. Haha. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
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Most welcome
