The Spark of Romance
Once ignited its impossible to extinguish passion's fire10 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
This is a new poem structure to me. I was amazed that you flawlessly found that many rhyming words. It was a race from flirtation to culmination in this piece. Well written and very evocative. I really enjoyed reading this. Gretchen
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This is a new poem structure to me. I was amazed that you flawlessly found that many rhyming words. It was a race from flirtation to culmination in this piece. Well written and very evocative. I really enjoyed reading this. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
An amorous moment is captured, well done!
You have done a great job with the prompt very imaginative.
The artwork is sizzling and sets the mood immediately.
The mono rhymes are like breathing without any effort it force.
The verse flows so smoothly, the tempo feels like jazz playing in a smokey bar
This is a refreshing topic for the poems I usually read on this site.
Thank you for sharing.
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An amorous moment is captured, well done!
You have done a great job with the prompt very imaginative.
The artwork is sizzling and sets the mood immediately.
The mono rhymes are like breathing without any effort it force.
The verse flows so smoothly, the tempo feels like jazz playing in a smokey bar
This is a refreshing topic for the poems I usually read on this site.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Wow, with a little "between-the-lines" you could have a pretty steamy beginning to an "X" rated novel. Very nicely rhymed. It doesn't sound forced and it is certainly exotic. Very nice.
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Wow, with a little "between-the-lines" you could have a pretty steamy beginning to an "X" rated novel. Very nicely rhymed. It doesn't sound forced and it is certainly exotic. Very nice.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Very well done, with a smoothly flowing mono rhyme which develops its theme through to the end. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
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Very well done, with a smoothly flowing mono rhyme which develops its theme through to the end. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
There is something about a monorhyme poem. I love the rhyming of your poem and also the image in this poem is sure a flaring. Good luck in the contest.
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There is something about a monorhyme poem. I love the rhyming of your poem and also the image in this poem is sure a flaring. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. You did a wonderful job with setting the mood and your use of words enhanced the atmospheres of passion between your couple. I like the presentation too. Everything worked well together.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Very nice. You did a wonderful job with setting the mood and your use of words enhanced the atmospheres of passion between your couple. I like the presentation too. Everything worked well together.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Lancellot,
Thank you for your 6 star review. Your comments and valued and appreciated. Every 6 star review I receive is a winner even if it doesn't win in a contest.
Cheers,
Eugene
Comment from Crystal McNeil
Such wonderful rhyming. It took me back to when my husband and I went on our first date. Great job capturing the essence of the moments as their interaction progresses.
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Such wonderful rhyming. It took me back to when my husband and I went on our first date. Great job capturing the essence of the moments as their interaction progresses.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from papa55mike
Once you let those flames ignite, they are difficult to put out. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the way you put it together.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Once you let those flames ignite, they are difficult to put out. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the way you put it together.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Ouch. That's quite the picture to get one to read the rest. It works.
I think the piece works very well though I had to pause and check with M-Webster for amatory, and then syncopated??? Neither are wrong just challenging.
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Ouch. That's quite the picture to get one to read the rest. It works.
I think the piece works very well though I had to pause and check with M-Webster for amatory, and then syncopated??? Neither are wrong just challenging.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You have nailed these feelings. Especially for those caught up in the moments. I enjoyed reading your romantic poem, which relates to many. And, yes, the passion and fire will continue to burn eternally. Thank you for sharing.
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You have nailed these feelings. Especially for those caught up in the moments. I enjoyed reading your romantic poem, which relates to many. And, yes, the passion and fire will continue to burn eternally. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
