The Board Meeting
Have you ever made a bet you sort of wished you hadn't ?4 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Tremendous rhyming, especially for such a long poem with so many lines that had to rhyme.
Next to last sentence: Insert (I) between (As) and (walked)
At least you succeeded, you made all those big, strong men cry.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Tremendous rhyming, especially for such a long poem with so many lines that had to rhyme.
Next to last sentence: Insert (I) between (As) and (walked)
At least you succeeded, you made all those big, strong men cry.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the great review and advice.
Comment from Wendy G
Love it, it's very creative, rhymes well, flows smoothly, and is refreshingly different. A mono rhyme on top of that - not easy to do. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Love it, it's very creative, rhymes well, flows smoothly, and is refreshingly different. A mono rhyme on top of that - not easy to do. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Thanks very musch the the great review.
Comment from dragonpoet
That was a well done mono-rhyme with a lot of rhyming words. It shows that all men face with their misdeeds, with a little help from a smart woman, will cry. It seems like she got revenge on all the men that gave her a mistreated her someway at work before she quit.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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That was a well done mono-rhyme with a lot of rhyming words. It shows that all men face with their misdeeds, with a little help from a smart woman, will cry. It seems like she got revenge on all the men that gave her a mistreated her someway at work before she quit.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the nice review. It was a fun story to write.
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Don?t mention it.
Joan
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an excellent Mono-rhyme contest entry. Your rhymes are succinct and specific and the flow fluently when read. Your theme is fascinating and the humor shines through in each well-written stanza. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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This is an excellent Mono-rhyme contest entry. Your rhymes are succinct and specific and the flow fluently when read. Your theme is fascinating and the humor shines through in each well-written stanza. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thanks very much for the great review. Glad you enjoyed it.
