An Unspoken Love
When love remains unrequited10 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful poem, and the sadness and angst of unrequited love are expressed well. Even the seasons reflect it. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
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A beautiful poem, and the sadness and angst of unrequited love are expressed well. Even the seasons reflect it. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
If you feel it, you had better say it.
Line 8: (dream's) should be (dreams) Dream's suggests ownership. dreams is the plural you need here.
Very nice Bermy
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If you feel it, you had better say it.
Line 8: (dream's) should be (dreams) Dream's suggests ownership. dreams is the plural you need here.
Very nice Bermy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Unrequited love can stem from a truly hurtful situation. To move on is not always so easy, meaning or the definition of your poem below.
Unrequited love can hurt badly, but you can also move on from it. Start by managing your reactions to avoid making things worse. Then, get space from the person and care for yourself emotionally. Finally, take steps to move forward with your life and consider new romantic options. per Internet.
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Unrequited love can stem from a truly hurtful situation. To move on is not always so easy, meaning or the definition of your poem below.
Unrequited love can hurt badly, but you can also move on from it. Start by managing your reactions to avoid making things worse. Then, get space from the person and care for yourself emotionally. Finally, take steps to move forward with your life and consider new romantic options. per Internet.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from June Sargent
A very poignant piece that captures the pain of unrequited love in a very tender way - without excessive drama. Suffering in silence as twined fantasies relinquish their hold. Well done.
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A very poignant piece that captures the pain of unrequited love in a very tender way - without excessive drama. Suffering in silence as twined fantasies relinquish their hold. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Eugene.
I enjoyed reading it. Your words were well chosen to
prove a point about love not returned. Your words
flowed smoothly with meaningful choices. I could
feel the angst of the one in your poem over be rejected.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Eugene.
I enjoyed reading it. Your words were well chosen to
prove a point about love not returned. Your words
flowed smoothly with meaningful choices. I could
feel the angst of the one in your poem over be rejected.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a well written and skilful poem Eugene and we have all felt these feelings at some time in our life and can identify with these words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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This is a well written and skilful poem Eugene and we have all felt these feelings at some time in our life and can identify with these words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from papa55mike
Those early desires are difficult to control but interesting go through. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Those early desires are difficult to control but interesting go through. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I get all the lines save for "summer falls victim to chastity's belt." What is it you are saying? You have a way with words my Bermudian friend. Do you closer to Hamilton or St. George?
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I get all the lines save for "summer falls victim to chastity's belt." What is it you are saying? You have a way with words my Bermudian friend. Do you closer to Hamilton or St. George?
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. Yes, not only was love not returned to this poor soul but no passion or lust either. What way to waste a young summer. You did a good job showcasing the feelings of losing out.
Good luck in the contest.
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Very nice. Yes, not only was love not returned to this poor soul but no passion or lust either. What way to waste a young summer. You did a good job showcasing the feelings of losing out.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
Comment from jessizero
It's like the Band said, "There's no love as true as the love that dies untold." I enjoyed your poem, though it made me sad. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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It's like the Band said, "There's no love as true as the love that dies untold." I enjoyed your poem, though it made me sad. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022