My Spirit Soars
A Prose Poem.8 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
taping a nap has a way of relaxing us and ready to fimich out outbday, itbseems to wok in Japan they have 25 minute cube you can pay to takeva nap in . they say it re freshes them.dreams have away of remaining unexplainable.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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taping a nap has a way of relaxing us and ready to fimich out outbday, itbseems to wok in Japan they have 25 minute cube you can pay to takeva nap in . they say it re freshes them.dreams have away of remaining unexplainable.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Smiles
Comment from BethShelby
This was a lovely dream. It would be nice to view the world form soaring about it. You describe all these sensations like being able to soar with the geese and see all the beauty before you awake to realize you were dreaming.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This was a lovely dream. It would be nice to view the world form soaring about it. You describe all these sensations like being able to soar with the geese and see all the beauty before you awake to realize you were dreaming.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thanks again!
Comment from Marienkiefer
-Wonderful perspectives, sensitization and sensitivity to the importance of healthy ecosystems.
-Gives the feel of an observation deck
-You take readers on aerial views of landscapes, flora, fauna, you being the human element, as we are all part of nature.
-Love the colour choice to enhance your work, of such an amazingingly breathtaking blue.
-You have covered the importance of earth and sky and vast oceans, biospheres, atmosphere and hemispheres, beauty of ice and rock formations, forests and reefs, the path and course of waterways.
My favourite line: -with misty waterfalls tumbling down their faces and then floating above a mass of flowers in shades of red, blue and purple-, showing an abundance of flowers and diversity of shades.
What a wonderful result you achieve with landscaping of your words and thoughts. We will all have to dream up more solutions to save our oceans and forests.
A compelling expedition for readers to experience. You have a very picturesque poem and nature guide.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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-Wonderful perspectives, sensitization and sensitivity to the importance of healthy ecosystems.
-Gives the feel of an observation deck
-You take readers on aerial views of landscapes, flora, fauna, you being the human element, as we are all part of nature.
-Love the colour choice to enhance your work, of such an amazingingly breathtaking blue.
-You have covered the importance of earth and sky and vast oceans, biospheres, atmosphere and hemispheres, beauty of ice and rock formations, forests and reefs, the path and course of waterways.
My favourite line: -with misty waterfalls tumbling down their faces and then floating above a mass of flowers in shades of red, blue and purple-, showing an abundance of flowers and diversity of shades.
What a wonderful result you achieve with landscaping of your words and thoughts. We will all have to dream up more solutions to save our oceans and forests.
A compelling expedition for readers to experience. You have a very picturesque poem and nature guide.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Hi, Marie. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
This is another interesting prose poetry piece, I haven't read all that much poetry of yours. But you have some terrific images here, of the purity of the landscape, the wide open expanses of the horizon that speak of the endless possibilities of life and nature. It's a contemporary kind of pastoral romanticism celebrating the beauty of the creation and the kindness of the creator. All the details in the descriptions of the geese flying over the oceans, the snow capped peaks, the pristine lakes created some wonderful visuals. estory
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This is another interesting prose poetry piece, I haven't read all that much poetry of yours. But you have some terrific images here, of the purity of the landscape, the wide open expanses of the horizon that speak of the endless possibilities of life and nature. It's a contemporary kind of pastoral romanticism celebrating the beauty of the creation and the kindness of the creator. All the details in the descriptions of the geese flying over the oceans, the snow capped peaks, the pristine lakes created some wonderful visuals. estory
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thanks again!
Comment from royowen
I coincidentally watched a documentary on the fjords of southern New Zealand where many of the scenes from the Hobbit and Lord of the Rings were shot, such a wonderful part of the world. This is such a lovely poem, about regions thst have been touched by the very hand of God. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : I (am) still alive.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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I coincidentally watched a documentary on the fjords of southern New Zealand where many of the scenes from the Hobbit and Lord of the Rings were shot, such a wonderful part of the world. This is such a lovely poem, about regions thst have been touched by the very hand of God. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : I (am) still alive.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words and help with this poem!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Most welcome
Comment from Teri7
Mike, This was a very good post about your out of body adventure. You used great descriptive words. As I read the words I could see the beauty you described so well. That would be something to see! Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Mike, This was a very good post about your out of body adventure. You used great descriptive words. As I read the words I could see the beauty you described so well. That would be something to see! Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Hi, Teri. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, that was some dream. I enjoyed this and the descriptive writing. A little bit of fantasy here as well as spiritual longing.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Wow, that was some dream. I enjoyed this and the descriptive writing. A little bit of fantasy here as well as spiritual longing.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Hi, Sally. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You described the beauty of Earth from many locations,
Mike. I enjoyed reading your prose poem. The picture
and color scheme wee perfect for your well-chosen words.
There's so much beauty in every place on Earth, but many
won't take the time to look and appreciate it. They complain
and some do things to harm our world. Yes, God put us here
to be stewards of the Earth. We still have a lot to learn and
must get back to praising Him for all he has, and continues, to
do.
Thank you for sharing a beautifully written poem, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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You described the beauty of Earth from many locations,
Mike. I enjoyed reading your prose poem. The picture
and color scheme wee perfect for your well-chosen words.
There's so much beauty in every place on Earth, but many
won't take the time to look and appreciate it. They complain
and some do things to harm our world. Yes, God put us here
to be stewards of the Earth. We still have a lot to learn and
must get back to praising Him for all he has, and continues, to
do.
Thank you for sharing a beautifully written poem, Jan
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Hi, Jan. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
