House of Fire
What to save from a fire.26 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well done. Nicely written.
Yummm. Mom's divinity!
I might have given you the sixth star, but for taking the whiskey ahead of your Bible..... Withholding it was a duh. Maybe I'll even go snatch the fifth.
(smiley face here)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Well done. Nicely written.
Yummm. Mom's divinity!
I might have given you the sixth star, but for taking the whiskey ahead of your Bible..... Withholding it was a duh. Maybe I'll even go snatch the fifth.
(smiley face here)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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LOL, thanks, Wayne.
Comment from joann r romei
This was great, I love that you took the recipies, some people are stingy with their fabulous dishes and do not share, and you didn't grab the computer or lap top!!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This was great, I love that you took the recipies, some people are stingy with their fabulous dishes and do not share, and you didn't grab the computer or lap top!!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Joann, thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Sally Law
I can understand your list and cherished Bible. How wonderful you've had such a life. Those who nothing to lose have never really lived or loved. That's my opinion, and I lived through many disasters.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law xo
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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I can understand your list and cherished Bible. How wonderful you've had such a life. Those who nothing to lose have never really lived or loved. That's my opinion, and I lived through many disasters.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law xo
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Sally, thank you very much for your review.
Comment from Annmuma
This is a very good story -- just right for the contest. Indeed, it could be the winner. I found the 5 items do give an insight into the writer. It is amusing that the writer would choose a file full of recipes and also mention that he had outgrown his HS Letter Jacket. There is a cohesion between the 5 items: acknowledgement of good food, good liquor, good athletics and the Good Book. Enjoyed. Good luck. ann
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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This is a very good story -- just right for the contest. Indeed, it could be the winner. I found the 5 items do give an insight into the writer. It is amusing that the writer would choose a file full of recipes and also mention that he had outgrown his HS Letter Jacket. There is a cohesion between the 5 items: acknowledgement of good food, good liquor, good athletics and the Good Book. Enjoyed. Good luck. ann
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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LOL, thank you for the review! Terry.
Comment from royowen
Yes indeed, just what would we take, apart from bare essentials, what else, family photos perhaps, things we've written? This is a gem of a contest, it's all about the things of the past. Beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Yes indeed, just what would we take, apart from bare essentials, what else, family photos perhaps, things we've written? This is a gem of a contest, it's all about the things of the past. Beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Sir, thank you for reading and your kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good story entry to the contest. The text is clearly stated. The font size is large and easy to read. The story seemed plausible. The visual fits. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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This is a good story entry to the contest. The text is clearly stated. The font size is large and easy to read. The story seemed plausible. The visual fits. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Sandra, thank you for reading.
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You are welcome.
