Butterfly Beauty
Butterflies are majestic creatures7 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
They certainly do live for a short time. I have seen so few of even the Monarch, which is a very common one around where I live. I think I could count on both hands how many I have seen this year. They used to be all over the place. It's too bad.
Great rhyming, nice tempo, easy to read, and all-around fun.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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They certainly do live for a short time. I have seen so few of even the Monarch, which is a very common one around where I live. I think I could count on both hands how many I have seen this year. They used to be all over the place. It's too bad.
Great rhyming, nice tempo, easy to read, and all-around fun.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from Teri7
I love butterflies also. You did a very good job with this monorhyme poem about the butterflies. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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I love butterflies also. You did a very good job with this monorhyme poem about the butterflies. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thank you Teri
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Butterflies are gorgeous, unpretentious creatures. If this is the butterfly you feel most attracted to, it could show that you prefer to live a life that relates to simplicity, without fear. Those who choose this butterfly have a fearless personality, they are calm, generous, merry, relaxed, too.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Butterflies are gorgeous, unpretentious creatures. If this is the butterfly you feel most attracted to, it could show that you prefer to live a life that relates to simplicity, without fear. Those who choose this butterfly have a fearless personality, they are calm, generous, merry, relaxed, too.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from papa55mike
That's why we plant Zinnias every year to draw a wide variety of butterflies. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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That's why we plant Zinnias every year to draw a wide variety of butterflies. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thank you
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A simple poem that meets the format specifics. The language is conversational. The narrative stays on point. The presentation fits well with the poem. The flow is good and the rhymes unforced.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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A simple poem that meets the format specifics. The language is conversational. The narrative stays on point. The presentation fits well with the poem. The flow is good and the rhymes unforced.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Comment from the13thpoet
A happy Thursday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the contest. I enjoyed the flow and rhyme of it. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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A happy Thursday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the contest. I enjoyed the flow and rhyme of it. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Beautifully stated factual poem. Your message is clear. You text is easily seen and read. The visual fits perfectly. However, the last ending word joy does not rhyme with the other words. The requirement is that all the lines have the same end rhyme. You have time to fix it. Since you fixed it, I changed my rating. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Beautifully stated factual poem. Your message is clear. You text is easily seen and read. The visual fits perfectly. However, the last ending word joy does not rhyme with the other words. The requirement is that all the lines have the same end rhyme. You have time to fix it. Since you fixed it, I changed my rating. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you I didn?t realize it didn?t rhyme I changed it
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Since you fixed it, I changed my rating. That last line now is more powerful too. Good luck in the contest.
