Evening Joy
Enjoying sunset with family, there's nothing better.2 total reviews
Comment from Faith Williams
There is some wonderful imagery in your poem. I like the line, 'spill melting orange sherbet onto serene, hushed water.' Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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There is some wonderful imagery in your poem. I like the line, 'spill melting orange sherbet onto serene, hushed water.' Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the read and encouraging review.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a beautifully written verse and a creative use of the writing prompt.
The use of strong verbs as well as the sensory details paints a clear picture for the reader to view and enjoy.
I found myself
"falling in," to your writing, which is the sign if a great poet.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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This is a beautifully written verse and a creative use of the writing prompt.
The use of strong verbs as well as the sensory details paints a clear picture for the reader to view and enjoy.
I found myself
"falling in," to your writing, which is the sign if a great poet.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the read and encouraging review. Much appreciated.
