Forlorn
The art of being alone.7 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written spiritual poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme. A nice overall presentation. Awesome photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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This is a nicely written spiritual poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme. A nice overall presentation. Awesome photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I see that your lovely, descriptive poem is dedicated to those with a wounded heart! There are MANY. Thank you for the expressive reminder
that the Lord will never forsake us and that His love shines through the
callousness of mankind.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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I see that your lovely, descriptive poem is dedicated to those with a wounded heart! There are MANY. Thank you for the expressive reminder
that the Lord will never forsake us and that His love shines through the
callousness of mankind.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Yes. Your words are poignant and encouraging. Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
I enjoyed your poem, along with its development. You are right: Jesus knows and understands, and cares about the callousness we face and people's disdain. He also experienced such things. You've expressed your feelings with clarity and imagination. Well done.
Wendy
Typo: "Devine" should be "divine"
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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I enjoyed your poem, along with its development. You are right: Jesus knows and understands, and cares about the callousness we face and people's disdain. He also experienced such things. You've expressed your feelings with clarity and imagination. Well done.
Wendy
Typo: "Devine" should be "divine"
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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You?re correct. Thank you so much for the typo update and the words of encouragement.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We certainly do need a guiding hand in today's challenging world and I enjoyed your advice here as you reflect your feelings in a poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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We certainly do need a guiding hand in today's challenging world and I enjoyed your advice here as you reflect your feelings in a poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much. Yes we certainly do.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is beautifully written, well developed, and crafted.
I enjoy the mood that your writing sets, it mirrors the sentiment left.
I appreciate your presentation. The stunning artwork compliments your writing.
The rhymes work well without force and create a tempo that resembles a ribbon floating in the sky.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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This is beautifully written, well developed, and crafted.
I enjoy the mood that your writing sets, it mirrors the sentiment left.
I appreciate your presentation. The stunning artwork compliments your writing.
The rhymes work well without force and create a tempo that resembles a ribbon floating in the sky.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Awww. Your words are hearty and pleasant to my soul. Thank you.
Comment from royowen
This reminds me of Matthew 11: 28-30, "Come to me ye who are heavy laden and I will you rest." The sombre tones of the poems are reaching for the peaceful pastures of rest. I love this post Brenda, it is a beautiful written piece, articulate, expressive and language rich. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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This reminds me of Matthew 11: 28-30, "Come to me ye who are heavy laden and I will you rest." The sombre tones of the poems are reaching for the peaceful pastures of rest. I love this post Brenda, it is a beautiful written piece, articulate, expressive and language rich. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much.
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Welcome
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much.
