The Widow
A Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
Excellent! Good story. Well written. The flow is good. The Dialogue is realistic and the ending is great. Very good. I like the way you have her looking in the mirror It's very effective detail. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Excellent! Good story. Well written. The flow is good. The Dialogue is realistic and the ending is great. Very good. I like the way you have her looking in the mirror It's very effective detail. Keep writing!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate that you took time to read and comment.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess, we just never really know the truth . . . at least, the whole truth and nothing but the truth. LOL. Congratulations and thanks for sharing. ................
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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I guess, we just never really know the truth . . . at least, the whole truth and nothing but the truth. LOL. Congratulations and thanks for sharing. ................
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Nope, not really. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it.
Comment from dragonpoet
Welcome Faith,
his is a fully told story about killing in self-defense because of living in an abusive relationship. She seemed to have kept this well hidden from her friends and the cops. It seems she is still safe from detection right now;
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Welcome Faith,
his is a fully told story about killing in self-defense because of living in an abusive relationship. She seemed to have kept this well hidden from her friends and the cops. It seems she is still safe from detection right now;
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it.
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No problem, Faith.
Joan
Comment from Maria Millsaps
This flash story has all the elements of a good suspense story: empathy concerns and escalating tension of internal conflicts. The death occurred before the story begins and the character is compelling. The perfect crime, without evidence or eyewitnesses.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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This flash story has all the elements of a good suspense story: empathy concerns and escalating tension of internal conflicts. The death occurred before the story begins and the character is compelling. The perfect crime, without evidence or eyewitnesses.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read and comment on my story.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
So she ran him over. You hear about a woman staying in an abusive relationship, and people question why she stays. Little do they know how afraid she was of the man who claimed to love her. If she had not killed him, he would have probably killed her. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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So she ran him over. You hear about a woman staying in an abusive relationship, and people question why she stays. Little do they know how afraid she was of the man who claimed to love her. If she had not killed him, he would have probably killed her. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my story.
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You are welcome.